Reviews for River of the Night
Grumpywinter chapter 11 . 2/2/2013
This ought to be interesting. Can't wait to see the exams.
Orchamus chapter 11 . 2/2/2013
Huh...weird, wonder what Makarov's problem with Kushina is?
dragonfighter11 chapter 11 . 2/2/2013
please update soon
RasenShuriken92 chapter 11 . 2/2/2013
It was funny
I like it xD
Thank u very much for the chap
NarutoxMirajane! :D xD
Have a nice day!
RoyalTwinFangs chapter 11 . 2/2/2013
Not bad man.
FateBurn chapter 11 . 2/2/2013
Good chapter please continue soon.
Dragonking20 chapter 11 . 2/2/2013
Once again another great chapter, still no action yet but that will change real soon. The scene at the docks was great and I hope for more like it at a later date, probably with Mira as the main girl of focus. I think your right about the no partner things, I actually think its because at the cannon point of the story there were more than a few S-class wizards to help with the exam that you needed to have partners just for a chance to pass, especially since Ezra was one as she is, in Makarov's own words, "a woman who doesn't know how to hold back". Can't wait to see what all you have planned for the exam and if more than one person will be promoted, I think Naruto AND Laxus will make but thats just me. Keep up the great work and look forward to your next
guisniperman chapter 11 . 2/2/2013
Epic, I liked how Naruto changed the situation completly with the book and the girl, turning them against Laxus.
bakapervert chapter 11 . 2/2/2013
Thanks for the update.
StattStatt chapter 11 . 2/2/2013
Ya-Hooo! I was REALLY looking forward to this chapter!

And oh my god, so many laughs! So many! The part with Naruto reading was EASILY the best one! "Are you reading porn?" My god.

Oh-ho, there is some other signifigance to the necklace after all?! Plot-twist!

Btw, are you going to bring any other Naruo chatcters into the story except the exceed one?

Keep up the AMAZING work, looking forward for MUCH, much more! (o'w'o)
Akira Stridder chapter 11 . 2/2/2013
hmm forgot what symbol is it..
Kalomin chapter 10 . 1/29/2013
don't be worried about the lack of action. You're getting in the much needed character development. I mean if you wanted action from the get-go, you should have jumped straight to the canon time-line. A good set-up makes the end story all the better.
Guest chapter 10 . 1/26/2013
Why not just have the spells in both, have english in parenthesis or something, that way nobody has anything to complain about. Good story so far, keep it up.
Djdj chapter 10 . 1/26/2013
Besides the grammar, this chapter was pretty good. The plot thickens...
apimpnamedkyuubi chapter 10 . 1/26/2013
With Laxus and Naruto being close friends, will you have Laxus push the idea of Naruto's own moon guard? Since he eventually gets Evergreen, Freed, and Bickslow.
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