|Reviews for River of the Night|
| kihakukage chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
really interesting cant wait for more
| Zweig chapter 2 . 11/24/2012
About the pairing please make it a Harem with five members:
About Naruto joining Fairy Tail i would say to let him rescue Erza and then join together with her.
also please let Naruto join Natsus Team during the Galuna-Island arc i think it is somewhat fitting.
At last please make some selfwritten storys after he joined Fairy Tail but before Lucy joins (most writer simply make a Timeskip and that is sad because that shows that they only can follow canon with small differences)
Please use my suggestion and update soon.
| Sir Deadpool chapter 2 . 11/24/2012
Interesting chapter, I look forward to seeing this get into the Fairy Tail story line with Naruto at either Fairy Tail or Blue Pegasus. Preferably having him be stronger than Natsu.
| Akira Stridder chapter 2 . 11/24/2012
hmmm.. not bad
| The Arsenal chapter 2 . 11/24/2012
More description please.. Like the dragon body, landscape, and such... But otherwise interesting fic
| DragonOfApocalypse chapter 2 . 11/24/2012
I love it!
Your fic is amazing!
Thank I very much for the chap!
I enjoy it very much
Hope u can update soon
Have a nice day!
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/24/2012
wonder how it will be when he learn the dragon force
and how it will be when she leave
| natsu chapter 2 . 11/24/2012
so is he the moon dragon slayer
| Keeper of Storms chapter 2 . 11/24/2012
Eh, I like the way you've been writing things so far!
I'm curious as to how things are going to work out, but I can be patient! Despite my family's beliefs otherwise!
| StattStatt chapter 2 . 11/24/2012
Oh, yuo freaking tease. You havn't even let Naruto learn the dragon's name yet... then again, it does create some very awesome suspence!
I find it very interesing with the whole Naruto's appearence changing, and I want to know what kind of moves he can use SO bad! Also curius to know what his take-over is! I WANNA KNOW!
I also like the dragon's attitude, just loves to tourture her little apprentice. (Lololol)
Keep up the AMAZING work, looking forward for MUCH, much more! (o'w'o)
| 0 Jordinio 0 chapter 2 . 11/24/2012
Quite a few spelling mistakes, you need to watch out for those. Tone down on the overuse of the word 'also', it was a word made to be used the same way as the word 'and' but sounds completely retarded if not used properly, so unless you're certain you know the right way - so far it looks like you don't - don't use it, it makes what I'n reading sound stupid, as if somebody out of breath as trying to add one more thing to a massive sentence that left them out of breath in the first place.
A great deal of the time, you forget to add (?) or (!) when you have questions or exclamations being asked/spoken.
| Ninpou chapter 2 . 11/24/2012
like the update.
looking forward to the next chap!
| BoB teh Snail chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
I assume the dragon is completely an OC?
| Kry Havick chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
lol flies are so annoying
| Soahc Redrosid chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
The Satan Soul part of Kushina's Take-Over magic is unique, but your not the first to give Kushina Take-Over Magic, Apocalypse Dragon Slayer by 0 Jordinio 0 gave Kushina Take-Over Magic but she had Kyuubi as her main form, it was published 2012/06/19. I still think it's a pretty awesome idea though, and this prologue has left me wanting to find out what happens next. Keep up the good work!