|Reviews for The Unknown|
| 4649123 chapter 4 . 5/13
Updating soon my ass! It's been years and you have obviously abandoned this story! If you don't wish to finish than remove the story it is rude to readers to do this. Shame it had potential
| aimee chapter 4 . 11/21/2012
thank you so much for this chapter. im really excited to read it. i know the next chapter would be really intresting.
| J chapter 4 . 11/20/2012
Hmmm...I'm surprised that Christian would invite her to Escala not knowing anything about her... :/
This is a cool idea tho, looking forward to this story. :D
| aimee chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
hi i like this story. can u make longer? ill wait for the new chapter. ill check it everyday.
| dm1990 chapter 4 . 11/20/2012
Another miss, Christian's home is not Escala, not after Teddy and Phoebe were born. There home is the big house they have on the coast.
| Anastasia DeSilva chapter 3 . 11/20/2012
Longer chapters please
| lisalilac chapter 3 . 11/19/2012
Please continue! I like it!
| Samantha Sam5973 chapter 3 . 11/19/2012
Interesting start. Keep writing. Longer chapters would really help keeping your readers interested.
post more soon!
thanks - Samantha
| ClaryRoss chapter 2 . 11/18/2012
This isn't a book, it's a fanfiction. A book has pages and is your own original idea.
| KCat2005 chapter 2 . 11/17/2012
Interesting. Update soon. Thanks for this.
| dm1990 chapter 2 . 11/17/2012
You got Christian's age wrong. About the time Teddy was born he was already 29. When Phoebe was born Teddy was 2. So that makes Christian age like around 31 or 32.
| C-bride chapter 2 . 11/17/2012
please keep writing
| kathd16 chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
like the prologue
| TheFabulousLifeOfZoe chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
hey, look, the prologue sounds really interesting, I really want to read on.
One thing bothers me though. Why do you always put two dots after a sentence?
Put either one (usually) or three (when the thought/sentence isn't finished).