|Reviews for Brothers|
| Book girl fan chapter 19 . 12/7/2013
Only one thing you might want to fix, for the rest is well written.
It should have been three weeks 'since' his rescue, not three weeks 'sence' his rescue.
| librophile chapter 19 . 12/3/2013
*chuckle* 'Oh, hello long-lost brother...' I'm looking forward to the upcoming scene.
| Book girl fan chapter 18 . 8/20/2013
He may be alright, but I think it will take a while.
| Book girl fan chapter 17 . 7/31/2013
John is in a lot of trouble.
| Book girl fan chapter 16 . 7/29/2013
John passed out? That isn't good.
| librophile chapter 16 . 7/29/2013
Um... Yikes? Please tell me you'll conclude this scenario instead of leaving it on a cliffhanger!
| LolSherlockFandom chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
Hey couple of constructive things here:
1. You said they were twins, and it would be obvious if they met again.
2. The chapters and description are a bit vague.
3. I'm sorry to say that your story is not very believable as Sherlock and John are so different.
| Book girl fan chapter 15 . 7/14/2013
A robber would have to be particularly thick to break into Sherlock Holmes's house.
| Book girl fan chapter 14 . 7/7/2013
I like Mary, I think she's a real sweetheart.
| Book girl fan chapter 13 . 7/4/2013
No, I don't think he'll be coming back any time soon!
| Guest chapter 13 . 7/4/2013
I wonder what Henry wantd at Baker street in the first place...
| Bluerosebud chapter 12 . 7/2/2013
Hmm, I see what you're doing here, and this certainly explains why Watson showed less concern over their separation, but I still feel like any actual brother-as Holmes is supposed to be-would have asked sooner and with less "it's okay if you don't want to tell me."
Still, I forget that this is -Holmes- I'm talking about. Maybe this is credible after all.
That aside, I also have to say, your writing on this is getting much better. So keep it up
| Book girl fan chapter 12 . 7/1/2013
Didn't Watson have an older brother who Holmes deduced was a drunkard? How can you explain that? Not to criticize you, just as a possible story idea.
| Kikiliki chapter 12 . 7/1/2013
Good chapter :)
| Kikiliki chapter 11 . 4/13/2013
Great Story! Please update