|Reviews for The Price of being a Warrior|
| Asso chapter 2 . 11/20/2012
This is a very enjoyable chapter. In the first we felt the joy of writing, of narrating, which resulted in joy and pleasure to readers.
Here, there's something else: the joy and pleasure to hook in (positively, of course) the attention of readers.
A truly succeeded attempt.
| Belen09 chapter 4 . 11/20/2012
Very good tight chapter. Well written!
| Nyotarules chapter 3 . 11/19/2012
Entertaining sequel, good balance of the war (not too many battles) and the story of characters involved. T'Pol's father is a shrewd politician and makes a good baddie, if she knew how manipulative he was she would kill him herself, what happened to her sister? Another question, if Section 31 is so good at covert operaions how comes they cannot stop Earth First or Terra Prime members from joining Starfleet?
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/19/2012
very good chapter. I'm enjoying the spy business, nice little break until the war heats up. Also, you're doing a great with describing the animating of Erib's antennae for her different moods - it adds good definition to the scene. Anyway, update soon.
| Alex Joleta chapter 3 . 11/19/2012
Thank you, Thamk you, Thank you. Your writing is fantastic. This is a great chapter. A perfect mix of mystery and love. More Please!
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/18/2012
very good chapter. I look foward to more section 31 stuff, along with T'pol helping a conflicted Trip. Update soon!
| badkarma00 chapter 2 . 11/18/2012
Ah, a new twist, and a good one. I'm interested to see who the assassin is, though.
Great story line you've started here!
| Alex Joleta chapter 2 . 11/18/2012
Great chapter. Ready and waiting for more.
| Teri chapter 2 . 11/18/2012
I think this may be one order from Section 31 that Malcolm completely agrees with - protect Trip & T'Pol. I have been enjoying these stories very much. Thank you for sharing them.
| orionastro chapter 2 . 11/18/2012
excelent new chapter earth first is going to get a rude awakening, when section31 crash upon them
| Belen09 chapter 2 . 11/18/2012
Earth First? I wondered when the isolationists would show up . . . and Section Thirty-One too.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
uh oh, don't know if I like "at any costs" sounds ominous. However, I do look forward to Shran and Soval both in the the andorian guards presence...should be good.
| Alex Joleta chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Great continuation. Love the start and I am sure I will love the rest. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
| orionastro chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
very good begining for the new story , time to kik the romulans back to their own space
| dialee chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
As I previously posted, I enjoy your Enterprise (Trip and T'Pol) stories tremendously despite the grammatical and typo errors.
Two aspects of your plots which I liked was Archer marrying into Tucker's family. Most authors when they separate Trip and T'Pol from Enterprise, they don't really know how to keep Archer in the storyline. There is a feeling of awkwardness. You have given Archer more relevancy being related to Trip as well as being commander of the Second Fleet in the story.
Second aspect of the plot is the development of Shran and Andoria into the story. Given the title of this segment of the whole story, Price of a Warrior, I hope no one dies stupidly, although it does happen in war.