Reviews for Welcome To The Family
Shiny knight chapter 6 . 6/26/2016
Ok, first up, a confession. Never seen the show. Nothing more than a passing familiarity with the outline.
But, what did I think. Well...I'm not going to look at this as a story, its not, its a series of vignettes, scenes from a overeaching arc. So, the whole thing is, by its nature, a little disjointed.
Looking at the individual chapters/ scenes, some I quite liked, some less so.
Details, you cry, well, the character of Joan wasn't rounded out, she came across flat. Sherlock, was a neat modern interpretation of the classic Rathbone with a little Downed jnr thrown in. And Luna? Seen her in your fiction before, this variant had a nice feel of Summer Glau as River Tamm (Firefly). On the whole, with a lot of development and fleshing out, filling in there is a story in there, but it needs work. As sketches, they were good sketches, by no means finished, but that's the nature of a sketch. xx
Insane-Mad-Hatter07 chapter 6 . 8/20/2014
Please please please update it brilliant
Guest chapter 6 . 1/12/2014
Please do another chapter!
imaninja41 chapter 6 . 12/26/2013
Love it. And I support the idea of Sherlock homeschooling her!
Guest chapter 6 . 12/13/2013
Pretty please do some more :)
Guest chapter 6 . 11/4/2013
Ugh, gosh. This is my fav elementary story and only one I've found with this dynamic. The OC you've created seems unique and intriguing. I'd love for you to keep posting reguarly, I just adore this story.
Luna-Dara chapter 6 . 10/26/2013
It's pretty interesting
red2013 chapter 6 . 10/26/2013
great chapter and i feel sorry for luna at school.

red
putyourrecordson chapter 6 . 10/26/2013
this is really good, its an interesting story and I really hope to read more in the future.
Guest chapter 5 . 10/18/2013
This is adorable! And perfect! And just the best ever omg I love it so much!
GhostPastey chapter 5 . 10/16/2013
I know that this says complete... but I am thinking that you need to continue this! This is great! I love the interaction between Sherlock and Luna. The written relationship, in my opinion, between Joan and Luna is there it just isn't elaborated like Sherlock's is... does that make sense? I would like to see their relationship grow because Luna trusts her and vise versa so it'd be really cool in my opinion. However, you're the author not me :P
Whatever you do though, LOVE IT! :]
KZ
red2013 chapter 5 . 8/21/2013
great chapter in this story.

red
red2013 chapter 4 . 6/30/2013
good chapter for this story.

red.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
I LIVE IN CHICAGO! GO CHICAGO!
red2013 chapter 3 . 5/24/2013
good story.

red.
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