Reviews for Poetic Justice |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So I know this is my only review throughout this entire story and for that, I will just say I suck for not reviewing every single awesome and amazing chapter. You made me laugh, you made me get angry at certain characters, you made me cry, and you even made me positively giddy over the oh-so-yummy smut/porn. I fell in love with this story from the very first chapter and then I fell in love with Tony and Loki's care growing into love. Reading as Tony grew to care for Loki and protecting him made me want to keep reading and I am so glad I found your story and gave it a shot because you wrote one hell of a story. Thank you for not only writing this story, but for choosing to post it. I can guarantee that this will be a story I will surely return to read again and again. 3 JaspersDarlinKathy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh Tony... You really dont understands what actual, old fashioned Slavery entails do you? Loki would be the FARTHEST THING from laughing in this situation, believe me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i fucking love how you word the "brought it at Wal-Mart" in aesir I laugh so hard I woke up my dog and he looked at me like I was under attack |
![]() ![]() ![]() why is my poor baby only eating Cherios? bacon, acovado, eggs ? give him the yummy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() thoroughly enjoyed reading |
![]() ![]() i JUST FINISHED YOU STORY AND iT WAS AWSOME! ALOUGHT I PREFERED HETERO COUPLES THE WAY YOU DEVELOP THIS STORY AND THE ROMANCE IS SO GREAT. AFTER READING ALL I CAN THINK WANT A 2ND PART WHERE TONY/LOKI MUST ACT THE NEW TUTORS OF PETER (SPIDERMAN) tHAT WOULD BE EPIC TO READ ABOUT IT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed your story tremendously. I found it "tracing backwards" I read here for only about a year, don't really know how to find nice stories, and had "poetic justice" referenced a couple of times before finally finding it some days ago. And I so love it. First, contrary to a lot of other stories, at the beginning Loki is not an abused, beaten-up, trembling, jumpy, scared, halv-starved miserable pitiable wreck of a person (who would evoke only pity in Tony but not understanding or arousal) but simply subdued and quiet, aware of the dangers of his station and punishment, still filled with anger but careful, but healthy enough to react in a positive and appreciative way to Tonys kindness. Their relationship evolves nice and slow, his reaction to Thor shows he still has fight in him and it is beautiful to see how he blossoms in Tonys care and love and how he even acts assertive in regard to his desires in respect of Tony, and so naturally and in love. Some descriptions like how Loki feels about longing for air, are utterly beautiful. Odin being NOT the total ass is a nice touch as well. I could go on, I truly enjoyed this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Take Loki outside |
![]() ![]() I absolutely adored this story! I didn't want it to end perfect characterisations, moments of laugh out loud humour, great sex scenes, fantastic story - honestly this is probably the best fic I've ever read and I'm so glad i read it! Thank you so much for writing this beautiful fic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved your story , now favourited! |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO NOT STEVE OH NO NO NO NO |
![]() ![]() ![]() YOU CAN'T DO THAR TO ME |
![]() ![]() ![]() gorgeous and spectacular story :) very well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() If they just don't let them go home, Asgard is ghetto. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Asgard why, ? |