|Reviews for Poetic Justice|
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/26
Eheheheheh! Love it thus far!
| A chapter 142 . 8/26
Just amazing. I loved the begining and the way all the misunderstandigs fit perfectly with their diferent pv
| Anon chapter 142 . 8/16
BEAUTIFUL, WONDERFUL, PERFECTLY LOVELY... I love this story so much! 3
| EspirituDelMar chapter 116 . 8/13
This story is awesome and all that but...116 chapters. It took you 116 f**king chapters to make them kiss, and you wonder (be it in jest or not) if it was TOO SOON?!
*throws bricks like crazy*
| KenzieMa chapter 142 . 7/25
As I was reading Loki's inner monologue I couldn't help but think "you know what would be just like tony to do in this situation? throw caution into the wind and just eat the damn thing." So as you can imagine, when that was EXACTLY what he did " nearly fell out of my chair laughing.
Anyway, with that little anecdote out of the way, I just wanted to say that this story is one of the best I've come across and I have read A LOT of FrostIron. I'll definitely keep an eye out for any other stories you write (if you decide to). Thanks for giving me a great pass time this boring summer!
ps: If you have a Tumblr I'd love to follow you:) Mine is queenofallhell
| Dude.cx chapter 100 . 7/20
I lasted all the way to the first part in chapter 133 omg I had to stop I cant take so mush drama. I'm like end it at a happy momment that seems like happy ending. Lol I was no! Y did I continued reading this . xD damit. But I can't go no more lol too mush dramatic surprises. Not bad of a story it was first tortuous for me cuz how the slaves were treated :/. But shit went good after that whole episode.
| Dude.cx chapter 21 . 7/14
Good ending in this chapter xD mind blowing
| Tonzilla chapter 142 . 7/13
This was a really good story! I liked that it was this slow, it makes it more real :-) great work on Loki's feeling-trip!
| Herondale18 chapter 42 . 6/11
I like all the connections that Tony has. Smart cookie that one.
| Herondale18 chapter 35 . 6/11
Yay! Their relationship is building. That makes me so happy
| Ways of the Wind chapter 133 . 5/16
Okay firsto off, I just wanna say this-I do not even ship Tony and Loki. I didn't even know that this was a thing until stumbling on freaking tumble and seeing them as a slash pairing. I thought it was indeed the weirdest thing ever cause I mean wtf Iron man and Thor's brother? but dear God your story has made me a believer if not anything else.
So I'm choosing to review at this chapter as opposed to the last one because I accidentally read the last chapter prior to reading the rest of the chapter left leading to it. So I stop at 118 and accidentally clicked on 142 thinking that it was 119 so I'm technically done with your story but I'm juSt going back to read the chapters in between that I skipped. Oh spoiled alert in case no one is done reading the story.
Another reason why I chose to review at this chapter is because they finally said I love you! Damn I was waiting so long for it and you made the moment so perfect and sweet. Gah my feels right now I was literally contemplating when the he'll they we're going to say it right before they did. I was so afraid thair feelings for each other just being lust. So happy
Anyway your story is hilarious. You are so very talented at writing. I literally loved how Tony kept giving Loki those weird nnicknames. HAHaha brilliant. I also found myself laughing for quite some time after the first sexual fantasy that Tony had of Loki in the shower when he questioned himself like "Did I actually just do that?" That guilt trip you have after pleasure is so real though
I really love how the relationship blossomed in this story. Very even paced and natural. At first, the expected romance would have seemed impossible or at least interesting considering they had such a rocky start and Loki's expectations of him being so low. It was very sweet, funny, and cute. I enjoyed the ride.
Rreally enjoyed the way you wrote Loki with a vulnerable side. What with him being incompetent with his role and his abilities taken away from him. Really allowed me to view him in a different light as opposed to the arrogant proud prince we all know and love haha you kept it believe and not ooc. So thank you for that :) you've kind of inspired me.
Thank you so much for your fan fiction. I couldn't express my love for your writing enough. I mean it! You deserve each and every review.
Gros bisous ma Cherie
| Books are awesome01 chapter 15 . 5/13
| alexiana75 chapter 125 . 5/9
Hmmm...Do I sense here a future threesome? Or, at least, a slighty reformed Steve?
| alexiana75 chapter 123 . 5/9
Now, who will that agent be? Banner? Clint? Natasha?
| alexiana75 chapter 119 . 5/8
You are very good at described such...activities. You managed to write literature, not porn