|Reviews for Wait|
| TheGrammarQueen chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
Things to do after reading this fanfiction:
1) Go into a corner and contemplate life
2) Huddle up in a ball and cry
3) Scream at the story
4) All of the above
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/22/2013
Step 1: curl up on the ground
Step 2: try not to cry
Steo 3: cry a lot
| LuffyForKing chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
This is so heartbreaking I just want to cry! It was beautifully written though.
| Ariel Tran chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
Yeah, "Tomorrow, he will tear down the world".
| eyesonbluefire chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
This shattered my heart into pieces.
The last part breaks me:
-"See ya on the other side, Shorty," he tells her, and means it. And in her stead, he breathes.
Tomorrow, he will tear down the world.-
Left me sobbing in pain & sadness, this was beautiful.
It moved me so much.
| Jolene chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
When I read this I cried a little. You are one incredible writer!
| Mickey Levy chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
Oh... God.. Trying so hard not to cry right now.. (Failing miserably I might add..)
| kylieblack chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
This is the best damn story in the entire world. I am fucking crying. Gajeel is awesome and wonderful.
"There is no battlefield raging around them, the way he had always thought it would go down. No blood, no fading screams, no clashes of blades and magic. The ground does not heave beneath them, and the mountains aren't crumbling – they loom in the distance, unshakable and unperturbed by the sheer fucking disaster happening in the world at their feet. The heavens don't weep, either; the sun shines like it's just a normal day and not the last in his life. There are no evil wizards or dragons threatening to upend the world, but there doesn't need to be, for the world is ending either way, and there is nothing he can do to stop it. There is no one he can defeat – no wrongs he can make right."
This part is the best.
'"Shrimp," he tells her then. "Midget. Shortstuff." As though it changes anything.
"Shorty," she adds, and he wants to break something. Anything. The wall, the room, the building. The world.'
And here I was crying so hard. I'm not good with reviews, and I'm not english so I cannot actually write in it very well, I hope you understand that I really really really loved this story, it's one of the best Gale I've read so far. I hope you'll continue writing, and updating other stories *cough*Hatchling*cough*.
Ps:'Tomorrow, he will tear down the world.'
| scythe's seranade chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
I'm going to sit in the corner and cry my eyes out now...
| floating on clouds above chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
This is so sad. ):
| theformulaofpudding chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
I swear, you are trying to kill me.
| moon strut chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
That was beautiful and tragic and your GaLe stories are REALLY amazing as always. I'm always used to reading death!fics in which they are in the middle of a raging war, and so it was refreshing that yours turned out to be in the nice solitude of a hospital room.
The repetitive wiling of the blood from her chin was a brilliant touch.
I also quite like the last line. It's very Gajeel-esque.
| halfmoon101 chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
It's so sad...
| SandmanCircus chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
| Elby-Tiadoroppu chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
OH MY FREAKING GOD!
I am crying so hard right now, this story is AMAZING! :O
honestly, too good for words!