looking foward to reading more

I've always wondered about that as well. In some stories it makes perfect sense why people would believe magic is real. In a Harry Potter / Starwars crossover, they already know about jedi, so what does it matter that there's people claiming to be wizards? Most people probably couldn't tell you the difference between the two. In this sort of story though, and in say, a Fast and Furious crossover with Harry Potter, it doesn't make any sense for people to be that accepting.

I admit, I likely didn't help much in the way of "making your writing better", given most of your fics I've come to the party late. However, I can't stop pointing out the things I enjoy in your writing style, even when you're playing with your style and trying new things. In any case, I do enjoy every piece I've read and truly hope you one day get the chance to finish off your story lines here.

Very nice. Having a double edged sword concept is always interesting. This again, is one of those things that a lot of authors don't handle well, and fanfic authors pretty much never even touch on.

I'm not sure you actually finished this fic, but if it isn't already, here's hoping reviews will manage to convince you to come back and complete the open ends of your various stories.

Aah, right. I forgot he comes across a spirit and starts to learn from her. Nice.

This chapter has always been one of my faves in this story. The game is a really cool concept and the fact Harry manages to pull off that win the way he does makes it all the more interesting.

For what it's worth, I dearly enjoy reading your fics, and am hoping for more of those days when your ff demands attention. Most of these stories are so much more interesting than the original source material.

Now he's even becoming a medical professional. Harry's really expanding that grouping of skills. Glad to see Winky is ok and now back with the team.

Your note on this chapter was one of the most interesting parts for me. I love the amount of thought that goes into your various fics. No matter how small the detail might seem to the reader, it's that sort of thing that makes a big difference. Even though this was written in 2012 or 2013, you used the true bathroom situation from the time period the story is placed. Most people don't pay attention to little things like that.

Hahahaha! I love that last scene in this chapter. Kicking her in the shin and tossing her into the fountain. Fantastic!

That's great. A little surprised that Harry wasn't playing pilot, but good to see him branching out to other skill sets.

Aah, Harry's introduction to the video game world. I vaguely remember where this fic goes with the whole video game stuff.

Well, clearly the world did not end on Friday back then. i'm enjoying reading this fic and can't recall if you had finished it or not. I'm probably going to get to the end and be disappointed, but still going to read and review each chapter.

And next chapter, we move into the secondary world. I know I've read this fic before, but as with your other stories, am enjoying it just as much as the first, and possibly the second time I previously went through the material.