Reviews for The Next Lord of Kobol |
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Wulffe chapter 1 . 11/17/2012 Very interesting begining .. :-} |
Olaf74 chapter 1 . 11/17/2012 Please more! |
Eclipse1234 chapter 1 . 11/17/2012 I cackled like a maniac when I saw THE jbern was posting a new fanfic. Was in class at the time...got weird looks all around. Cant wait for this to really get underway. |
KSpringer chapter 1 . 11/17/2012 Welcome back. You were missed. Interesting story - I'll be looking to see where it leads... |
Lansday-Larry chapter 1 . 11/17/2012 Well you get my WELCOME BACK! Was looking forward to The Lie I've Lived's sequel but I will gladly take this. Sound like a great adventure, so far I like it. BTW on a side note love your official novels. See you next week! -Larry |
Wirespeed91 chapter 1 . 11/17/2012 This looks very interesting. I can't wait to see where BSG comes in. I will be waiting with much anticipation. SGW |
Brian64 chapter 1 . 11/17/2012 Very entertaining start. I haven't read any stories that have started from the 'not coming quietly' scene, and I also don't recall any stories where both Sirius and Dumbledore have worked together to help Harry. I hope you have more chapters on the way, as I'm intrigued by what you have planned for the BS-verse. I admit, I only watched though the first couple of seasons of BS as I was annoyed with the way they were developing the Apollo/Starbuck romance (& wiki just confirmed it was going to get worse). |
Toebang chapter 1 . 11/17/2012 This looks like it could be a fun story. I'll follow it for sure if you really are planing on updating every week. |
NobodiesHiiro chapter 1 . 11/17/2012 Can't say I know anything about battlestar galactica, but I was like hey! It's Jbern. It's bound to be good. And here we are. Thanks for the chapter. As for actual review stuff. It felt a but rushed. Not really badly so, but enough it was noticeable. Everything felt kinda jammed together. It got a bit overwhelming. Luckily, that never affected the flow so what was rushed turned into more of a fast paced opening. Kinda like a pilot for an action television series. So that was pretty cool. It's a bit early to say but the characterization seem spot on. I never found myself wondering 'who's talking?' Excellent work there. Other than that? I can't think of anything. So again, thank you for the story. Until next time. |