Reviews for The Next Lord of Kobol
Wulffe chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Very interesting begining ..

:-}
Olaf74 chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Please more!
Eclipse1234 chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
I cackled like a maniac when I saw THE jbern was posting a new fanfic. Was in class at the time...got weird looks all around.

Cant wait for this to really get underway.
KSpringer chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Welcome back. You were missed.
Interesting story - I'll be looking to see where it leads...
Lansday-Larry chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Well you get my WELCOME BACK! Was looking forward to The Lie I've Lived's sequel but I will gladly take this. Sound like a great adventure, so far I like it. BTW on a side note love your official novels.

See you next week!

-Larry
Wirespeed91 chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
This looks very interesting. I can't wait to see where BSG comes in.

I will be waiting with much anticipation.
SGW
Brian64 chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Very entertaining start. I haven't read any stories that have started from the 'not coming quietly' scene, and I also don't recall any stories where both Sirius and Dumbledore have worked together to help Harry. I hope you have more chapters on the way, as I'm intrigued by what you have planned for the BS-verse. I admit, I only watched though the first couple of seasons of BS as I was annoyed with the way they were developing the Apollo/Starbuck romance (& wiki just confirmed it was going to get worse).
Toebang chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
This looks like it could be a fun story. I'll follow it for sure if you really are planing on updating every week.
NobodiesHiiro chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Can't say I know anything about battlestar galactica, but I was like hey! It's Jbern. It's bound to be good. And here we are. Thanks for the chapter.

As for actual review stuff. It felt a but rushed. Not really badly so, but enough it was noticeable. Everything felt kinda jammed together. It got a bit overwhelming.

Luckily, that never affected the flow so what was rushed turned into more of a fast paced opening. Kinda like a pilot for an action television series. So that was pretty cool.

It's a bit early to say but the characterization seem spot on. I never found myself wondering 'who's talking?' Excellent work there.

Other than that? I can't think of anything. So again, thank you for the story. Until next time.
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