Reviews for Another Lost Soul
vwalsh chapter 2 . 11/22/2012
Doesn't surprise me that Christian wants to take her home , but shouldn't he talk to Ana first .
J chapter 3 . 11/19/2012
I say no on the love interest, especially cuz I see her having a male tutor and I would *hate* for her to fall in love with him, it's too cliche. It would make sense just if she felt comfy enough to confide in him, but I also hope she'll confide in Christian or Elliot or Ana.. I also wouldn't want her to run away or go missing. As for being taken back into a care home, I could see that as a threat, and have Christian and Ana really fight to keep her.
bb-4ever chapter 6 . 11/21/2012
good chapter. glad he caught her. love how protective he and the others are of her. look forward to more soon
froggydukes chapter 6 . 11/21/2012
so does ana get to touch him already? wow poor jess, theyve done a number on her,
Mrsjsd chapter 6 . 11/21/2012
I hope Jess knows now that she can trust Christian and his security to take care of her. Thanks for the update. More soon please. Thanks and have a happy Thanksgiving
lisalilac chapter 5 . 11/21/2012
I don't know what happened? Is Jess going to fall in love with Alex?
lisalilac chapter 4 . 11/21/2012
Christian really does have a heart. Great chapter!
bb-4ever chapter 5 . 11/21/2012
good chapter. cant wait to find out what happened. clearly the club men want her back did they prostitute her?
froggydukes chapter 5 . 11/20/2012
Wow I have a few guesses but none im willing to post...I know CG will be th eknight in shining armor and those three men wont get her...i like dher session with Flynn, we need more of those, will CG open up about his past
C-bride chapter 5 . 11/20/2012
good,short chapter ;) i think she was raped.

You call jess jade and i want to know more about her parents (her dad).

Can't wait 4 the next chapter, hope i get more answers.
meigs37 chapter 5 . 11/20/2012
Oh hope Jess is save... She could get a job with Ana maybe. Hope Ana and christian get married or pregnant in this story to add spice.
bb-4ever chapter 4 . 11/20/2012
good chapter. good to see her say yes to him fostering her. look forward to more soon
Guest chapter 2 . 11/18/2012
Don't make christian fall in love with her or make ana jealous or angry over this girl.
C-bride chapter 4 . 11/20/2012
good chapter ;)
froggydukes chapter 4 . 11/20/2012
Oh, I think her sessions with Flynn will very much be like Christians, this coudl be fun, perhaps a FLynn POV?
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