|Reviews for Another Lost Soul|
| greyfan 79 chapter 3 . 11/20/2012
i dont think a romantic interest as this girl is only 16 and that would be so wrong i do agree with alot of the other readers were ana and christian take her in and raise this girl together
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
Really different to all the other stories, can't wait for the next chapter :)
| Lizzard chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
Interesting. Is Jessica going to come between Christian and Ana? Romantic interest?
| Rachel chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
It's awesome like all ur writing! Keep going w the story please!
| dancemom33 chapter 3 . 11/19/2012
So I don't think she should go back in care;no running away, ?love interest and being taken...I think ana and Christian should marry and adopt her.
| godlovesebonie chapter 3 . 11/19/2012
I don't want her to get a romantic interest or runaway or get out into a home. I would say the if Christian and Ana were married they could adopt her. The drama is with trying to get it approved by the court. But her father comes in the picture first he tries to coerce her for money then when it doesn't work he kidnaps her but what he doesn't realize is Elliot comes after him. Added drama this causes problems with Kate he depends to much time worrying about the girl.
| froggydukes chapter 3 . 11/19/2012
I think you have done a wonderful job so far and am willing to let you take me wherever witht he story, you say you have already mapped out some chapters, so you have some idea...its really good so far!
| C-bride chapter 3 . 11/19/2012
Great chapter! i'll go to...is taken back into care.
I want to know Jess POV and for a girl that was been through so much, being a runaway and a former stripper she's very shy, anyway i like her.
| ArellaWhite chapter 3 . 11/19/2012
I don't want her to have a romantic interest. That would be to cheesy and stereotypical. Maybe she could have a younger sister or something or a little kid she is taking care of and she runs away to try and get back to them. That would be an original idea. Something that hasn't been done on her before.
| lisalilac chapter 3 . 11/19/2012
Maybe have Christian and Ana take her in permanently. They fight for her. She learns to trust the grey's and Ana. She goes back and forth from grace a house and Christian's house. Christian proposes to Ana and they get married not too far after that.
| lisalilac chapter 2 . 11/19/2012
Nice story! How far are Ana and Christian in this story? Does he love Ana in this story? Please continue!
| Peglyn23 chapter 2 . 11/19/2012
Starting to love this story too!.. I must say I'm following all your stories and I love your writings.. :) Please Con't :) *PS: Happy Thanagiving*
| dancemom33 chapter 2 . 11/19/2012
This sounds great ...where does the story fit in are Ana and Christian married? Kate? Kids? ?
| C-bride chapter 2 . 11/18/2012
btw a canteen at the hospital?
| 27ShadesOfElliePotter chapter 2 . 11/18/2012
I like so far! How far is Christian and Ana in their relationship at this point?