Reviews for A Wheezer's Demise
Storytime-Nightwish chapter 1 . 10/27/2013
Loved it so much! I could imagine myself doing that all I wanted, but if I were in Furnace, I don't think I'd have the guts unless someone physicly hut my friends...they would then die...or live hell.
Taylor1103 chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
I loved it! Escape From Furnace is my favorite series. You did a great job with this and I felt like I was reading the books again (now I actually want to re-read them!) Keep writing, I'd love to read more.
KajitheMango chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
I love it! :)
TheNugget chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
I love how descriptive you are...it almost felt like I was reading the book again! This is a great Fic, especially for something as unique as Lockdown (: Loved it!
Edhla chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
Disclaimer: haven't read the book, sorry :o

That said, this is a cracking fic, especially since it's your first! One hell of a title, that draws you in, and you make nice use of some great imagery and good action.

There were a couple of minor spelling and grammar issues, which I'm happy to send to you if you want them, and I definitely think you could expand this, make it longer and more detailed, bring out your characters more. But really, you've done a good job :)