|Reviews for In the New Holland Suburbs|
| legna.wsit chapter 1 . 4/6
sorry heres the rest of it:
personality: Lona is kind, funny, and sweet she sticks up for what she belive in she can be a little rebellious, short - tempered and tomboyishyish but she is strong willed, quick witted, willful, brave, adventerous, free spirited, fair, a little shy, cunning, athletic and intelligent girl whose there for here friends and family
elective: arts and music
talents: she has an amazing singing voice and an amazing artist too
other: she has an scottish accent and she has a necklace of her clan crest around her neck and she's amazing at archery
| legna.wsit chapter 1 . 4/6
here's my new oc that you might understand:
name: Lona Maclean
nationality: scottish and native american
pets: a female otter named marlene and a male owl named matt
relationship with others: she's best friends with weird girl and elsa. close friends with victor and edgar, good friends with bob. she's a bit scared of nassor but in good terms with him. toshiaki is in love with her she also has a crish on him but shes too shy to say it. and normal to everyone else
clothing: she wears a red long sleeve blouse with black high waisted skater skirt with black boots. she has her hair braided with red and blue feathers.
appearance: she oval shaped face with cheek bones slim and curvy body. she stands 5'1 and wiegths 61 pounds. ans she has snow white skin, rose red lips, ebony black braided hair with red and blue feathers and kaleidoscope eyes that change to blue to green to purple to brown and amber. her friends say she looks like snow white but with much prettier eyes.
| legna.wsit chapter 1 . 4/5
you know what please forget all my previous comments pls i'l make a new one so you can understand better
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/4
sorry i just made a tiny mistake she and nassor are good friends while toshiaki is in love with her and kiyomi likes him back but too shy to say it
| legna.wsu chapter 1 . 4/4
oh yeah i forgot kiyomi also practice fencing, judo and karate
| legna.wsit chapter 1 . 4/2
here if you want me to be more specific about kiyomi: her caramel is straight and has small curls in the end and reaches to her back.
kiyomi's voice is strong but feminine which fit for singing all cheyenne songs especially the dance of the wolf and she has a bit japanese accent and speaks it too.
she loves to draw and write new songs which are her hobbies
her name kiyomi means pure beauty and mclean is surname scottish or irish surname which is variant " son of the servant john"
| legna.wsit chapter 1 . 3/29
sorry i pressed post so here's the rest of it: elective: music and arts. clothing: she wears a red shoulder less sweater with a white undershirt black high waist skater skirt with black tights and black boots. appearance: she has smooth snow white skin that shimmers in the sun light and glows in the moonlight, she has a oval shaped face with check bones. slim and curvy body, her eyes are slightly slanted and look like a kaleidoscope to blue to green and to brown, with thick eyelashes. and perfect caramel hair she stands 5'1 and weighs 69 pounds. personality: kiyomi is sweet, kind and caring girl. she always sticks up for her friends and family, she shy to new people especially her crushes. she can be a little sarcastic, sly, competitive, and fiery. but she's also friendly, compassionate, intelligent, attractive, creative, faithful, loyal, hard-working, funny, honest, humble, organized, helpful, and patient girl, but when you provoke her or hurt her friends and family you will unleashed hell. talents:she's an amazing singer and artist. other: kiyomi is really athletic but tries to hide it.
| legna.wsit chapter 1 . 3/28
name: kiyomi mclean
nationality: japanese and native american
pet: a female white fox named angel
relationship with others: she's best friends with elsa and doesen't find weird girl creepy she's best friends with her too, she's close friends with victor and edgar and good friends with bob. both nassor and toshiaki are in love with her and she has a crush on them but too shy to say it to them. and normal to the every one else.
love interest*optional* toshiaki and nassor
| Elle chapter 1 . 1/16
Name: Ophelia Aguilera
Pet: Hamster named Theo
Relationship with others: She is generally nice to everyone, but protective of her family and friends, and is secretly very sensitive.
Love interest: She kind of has a crush on Victor
Elective: Drama and music
Clothing: Ophelia wears a simple bluish dress, and stockings ( or leggings whatever) and short boots
Appearance: She has a slight tan. Her eyes are pretty big, and brown. Her is wavyish and long, and brown. She usually leaves it open. She's thin and medium height.
Personality: She's sweet and loving to almost everyone. She is pretty talkative, and is obsessed with music.
Talents: science, singing, dancing
Others: Her family's weird past
| Pokemonfangirl chapter 1 . 6/7/2014
Hi i was wondering if you could use my oc.
Pet: cat (can turn into any type of big cat even ligers): nova
Never abandons her friends loyal to the core
Love Interest: Edgar
Clothing: red jumper with tiger leaping over flames that says wildfire on it,black trousers black trainers.
Hair colour: brown with silver mark through it (alapishia)
Personality: loyal, PTSD (Post Traumatic Stress Disorder cause : from being bullied) split personality (evil form kills everything around her exept for nova and her friends).
Appearance: only 2 inches taller than Edgar,retractable claws and fangs ( can also change into any big cat ligers too)
Evil form: black hair with red stripes in it,tail with razor sharp scythe on the end,cat ears shaped like devil horns,red and blue eyes (red outside pupil,blue inside) razor sharp fangs and claws (viscous personality)
End please use her!
| Mrs Lovett D chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
Name: Heather "Frost" Maurice
Gender: Female, obviously
Pet: A black mouse called Shadow, who hides in her hood and usually perches on her shoulder
Relationship with others: The kids call Heather "Frost" because is cold, her mum died in a blizzard, and she kind of hides in the shadows. Edgar calls her a poser emo, hurting her feelings greatly without realizing it. Thus, she loathes Edgar. She is a bit of a school recluse, sitting in corners and not saying much. Victor, being the sweet boy he is, tries to reach out to her, but usually ends up being awkward and saying something to make Frost feel offended. He doesn't "like" her, and she soon gets over each accidental comment.
Love Interest: None
Clothing: Frost usually wears black skinny jeans, a black tank and a white-and-black horizontally striped jacket. She always wears a pendant that has Jack Frost on it. She wears beat up black converse
Appearance: Frost has unbelievably pale skin, dark, sunken eyes, and a shaggy mop of red dyed hair. She has long lashes, and is very thin and long limbed. Her nose is long and straight, her eyes are big, brown and sad. She's an inch taller than Nassor, and is going through puberty.
Personality: Frost is shy, mournful, and keeps to herself. She consoles herself over her mother's death by reciting poetry and writing plays. She is rumoured to be bipolar, but this isn't true. Deep down inside, she really wants to be friends with everyone, but finds herself rejecting everyone's attempts to reach out.
Talents: Singing, she has a soprano voice that is clear, angelic, and haunting. She denies she sings well, despite Weird Girl's protests. (Frost sang for her one time)
Others: Frost also doesn't have a close relationship with her dad, he's always on trips.
| Eponine Everdeen chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
Name: Eponine Andrews
Nationality: French; she called Nassor Monsieur once, and swears in French sometimes. She has an accent.
Pet: A tabby cat named Thenardier.
Relationship with others: Follows Toshiaki around. He tries to avoid her. She gets along fairly well with others, especially Weird Girl.
Love Interest: Likes Toshiaki to the point of staring at him all the time.
Clothing: Eponine usually wears a knee length aqua blue dress with no leggings or tights and white flats. Her brown hair is usually braided by her mother and also sometimes down and curly.
Appearance: Eponine is very pale, and she has large green eyes. Her hair is dark, thick and curly. She is timid, her voice is soft and feminine. Her hands have long, slender fingers. Her nose is long and straight. She keeps to herself mostly, and can usually be seen singing in her yard "Do You Hear the People Sing?" from Les Miserables. She is halfway through puberty, but she still doesn't have to use her razor. She is on her period.
Personality: Eponine believes that everyone should be given a chance. She is timid and sweet, and is sometimes the target of bullies. She offers to help Toshiaki on all his science projects.
| Seeing Spirits chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
Name: Nellie Pearce
Age: Around 11 or 12
Nationality: British; she speaks with a Cockney accent.
Pet: A black cat named Twyla.
Love interest: Pines for Nassor, but he thinks she's a little odd.
Looks: Usually wears casual clothing. Long curly dark red hair. Freckles, pale skin tone.
Relationship with others: A little eccentric to normal people, Nassor avoids her sometimes, she mostly hangs out with Toshiaki because she thinks he's sweet.
Personality: Nellie is imaginative, and a hopeless romantic. She bakes meat pies in her spare time, but they aren't very good, so she feeds them to Twyla or Sparky. Nellie sometimes forgets she is at school,and daydreams. Like I said, she likes Nassor but he thinks she's odd.
| Sergeant Calhoun chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
Name: Catherine Jane Alvon (People call her CJ)
Nationality: Filipino/American (Speaks English only)
Pet: A Chocolate Brown dachshund named Coco
Relationship with others: She is friends with everyone except Weird girl, she thinks she's weird
Love Interest*optional*: Toshiaki, She visited Japan once and she had a crush on Toshiaki for as long as she can remember
Elective(Drama, Music, Art, Science,etc...): Art
Clothing: She wears a white button down shirt and skinny jeans regularly but wears a dress only on parties
Appearance: Black hair, brown eyes, fair skin, a fit body and is 5'03
Personality: Fun loving, Sweet and energetic
Talents: Double dutch, singing and dancing
| jaspar77 chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
Sure, I'll enter!
Name: Katy Bent
Age(11-13): Just turned 12
Nationality: Her family is German, but she has lived in America ever since she was 3 months old.
Pet: A terrier named Percy
Relationship with others: Best friends with Weird Girl and gets along decently with everyone else, though she very rarely talks to Bob/
Love Interest*optional*: Hm...Can I have Toshiaki?
Elective(Drama, Music, Art, Science,etc...): Art
Clothing: Katy wears a purple and black striped T-shirt and a black skirt. SHe wears her hair in two braids down her back, one tied with purple ribbon and the other black ribbon. As for shoes, she has a pair of black sneakers that she usually wears.
Appearance: Katy is 5'5, tall for her age, with very dark brown hair that looks black, but you can see the brown when sun shines on it. She has hazel eyes.
Personality: Katy often seen reading and usually tends to so even through class at school, but manages to pay attention at the same times and occassionally makes remarks to the class out of nowhere, then just goes on reading.
Talents: Multi-tasking. A decent artist, but nothing special.