|Reviews for In the New Holland Suburbs|
| legna.wsit chapter 1 . 3/29
sorry i pressed post so here's the rest of it: elective: music and arts. clothing: she wears a red shoulder less sweater with a white undershirt black high waist skater skirt with black tights and black boots. appearance: she has smooth snow white skin that shimmers in the sun light and glows in the moonlight, she has a oval shaped face with check bones. slim and curvy body, her eyes are slightly slanted and look like a kaleidoscope to blue to green and to brown, with thick eyelashes. and perfect caramel hair she stands 5'1 and weighs 69 pounds. personality: kiyomi is sweet, kind and caring girl. she always sticks up for her friends and family, she shy to new people especially her crushes. she can be a little sarcastic, sly, competitive, and fiery. but she's also friendly, compassionate, intelligent, attractive, creative, faithful, loyal, hard-working, funny, honest, humble, organized, helpful, and patient girl, but when you provoke her or hurt her friends and family you will unleashed hell. talents:she's an amazing singer and artist. other: kiyomi is really athletic but tries to hide it.
| legna.wsit chapter 1 . 3/28
name: kiyomi mclean
nationality: japanese and native american
pet: a female white fox named angel
relationship with others: she's best friends with elsa and doesen't find weird girl creepy she's best friends with her too, she's close friends with victor and edgar and good friends with bob. both nassor and toshiaki are in love with her and she has a crush on them but too shy to say it to them. and normal to the every one else.
love interest*optional* toshiaki and nassor
| Elle chapter 1 . 1/16
Name: Ophelia Aguilera
Pet: Hamster named Theo
Relationship with others: She is generally nice to everyone, but protective of her family and friends, and is secretly very sensitive.
Love interest: She kind of has a crush on Victor
Elective: Drama and music
Clothing: Ophelia wears a simple bluish dress, and stockings ( or leggings whatever) and short boots
Appearance: She has a slight tan. Her eyes are pretty big, and brown. Her is wavyish and long, and brown. She usually leaves it open. She's thin and medium height.
Personality: She's sweet and loving to almost everyone. She is pretty talkative, and is obsessed with music.
Talents: science, singing, dancing
Others: Her family's weird past
| Pokemonfangirl chapter 1 . 6/7/2014
Hi i was wondering if you could use my oc.
Pet: cat (can turn into any type of big cat even ligers): nova
Never abandons her friends loyal to the core
Love Interest: Edgar
Clothing: red jumper with tiger leaping over flames that says wildfire on it,black trousers black trainers.
Hair colour: brown with silver mark through it (alapishia)
Personality: loyal, PTSD (Post Traumatic Stress Disorder cause : from being bullied) split personality (evil form kills everything around her exept for nova and her friends).
Appearance: only 2 inches taller than Edgar,retractable claws and fangs ( can also change into any big cat ligers too)
Evil form: black hair with red stripes in it,tail with razor sharp scythe on the end,cat ears shaped like devil horns,red and blue eyes (red outside pupil,blue inside) razor sharp fangs and claws (viscous personality)
End please use her!
| Mrs Lovett D chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
Name: Heather "Frost" Maurice
Gender: Female, obviously
Pet: A black mouse called Shadow, who hides in her hood and usually perches on her shoulder
Relationship with others: The kids call Heather "Frost" because is cold, her mum died in a blizzard, and she kind of hides in the shadows. Edgar calls her a poser emo, hurting her feelings greatly without realizing it. Thus, she loathes Edgar. She is a bit of a school recluse, sitting in corners and not saying much. Victor, being the sweet boy he is, tries to reach out to her, but usually ends up being awkward and saying something to make Frost feel offended. He doesn't "like" her, and she soon gets over each accidental comment.
Love Interest: None
Clothing: Frost usually wears black skinny jeans, a black tank and a white-and-black horizontally striped jacket. She always wears a pendant that has Jack Frost on it. She wears beat up black converse
Appearance: Frost has unbelievably pale skin, dark, sunken eyes, and a shaggy mop of red dyed hair. She has long lashes, and is very thin and long limbed. Her nose is long and straight, her eyes are big, brown and sad. She's an inch taller than Nassor, and is going through puberty.
Personality: Frost is shy, mournful, and keeps to herself. She consoles herself over her mother's death by reciting poetry and writing plays. She is rumoured to be bipolar, but this isn't true. Deep down inside, she really wants to be friends with everyone, but finds herself rejecting everyone's attempts to reach out.
Talents: Singing, she has a soprano voice that is clear, angelic, and haunting. She denies she sings well, despite Weird Girl's protests. (Frost sang for her one time)
Others: Frost also doesn't have a close relationship with her dad, he's always on trips.
| Eponine Everdeen chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
Name: Eponine Andrews
Nationality: French; she called Nassor Monsieur once, and swears in French sometimes. She has an accent.
Pet: A tabby cat named Thenardier.
Relationship with others: Follows Toshiaki around. He tries to avoid her. She gets along fairly well with others, especially Weird Girl.
Love Interest: Likes Toshiaki to the point of staring at him all the time.
Clothing: Eponine usually wears a knee length aqua blue dress with no leggings or tights and white flats. Her brown hair is usually braided by her mother and also sometimes down and curly.
Appearance: Eponine is very pale, and she has large green eyes. Her hair is dark, thick and curly. She is timid, her voice is soft and feminine. Her hands have long, slender fingers. Her nose is long and straight. She keeps to herself mostly, and can usually be seen singing in her yard "Do You Hear the People Sing?" from Les Miserables. She is halfway through puberty, but she still doesn't have to use her razor. She is on her period.
Personality: Eponine believes that everyone should be given a chance. She is timid and sweet, and is sometimes the target of bullies. She offers to help Toshiaki on all his science projects.
| Seeing Spirits chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
Name: Nellie Pearce
Age: Around 11 or 12
Nationality: British; she speaks with a Cockney accent.
Pet: A black cat named Twyla.
Love interest: Pines for Nassor, but he thinks she's a little odd.
Looks: Usually wears casual clothing. Long curly dark red hair. Freckles, pale skin tone.
Relationship with others: A little eccentric to normal people, Nassor avoids her sometimes, she mostly hangs out with Toshiaki because she thinks he's sweet.
Personality: Nellie is imaginative, and a hopeless romantic. She bakes meat pies in her spare time, but they aren't very good, so she feeds them to Twyla or Sparky. Nellie sometimes forgets she is at school,and daydreams. Like I said, she likes Nassor but he thinks she's odd.
| Sergeant Calhoun chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
Name: Catherine Jane Alvon (People call her CJ)
Nationality: Filipino/American (Speaks English only)
Pet: A Chocolate Brown dachshund named Coco
Relationship with others: She is friends with everyone except Weird girl, she thinks she's weird
Love Interest*optional*: Toshiaki, She visited Japan once and she had a crush on Toshiaki for as long as she can remember
Elective(Drama, Music, Art, Science,etc...): Art
Clothing: She wears a white button down shirt and skinny jeans regularly but wears a dress only on parties
Appearance: Black hair, brown eyes, fair skin, a fit body and is 5'03
Personality: Fun loving, Sweet and energetic
Talents: Double dutch, singing and dancing
| jaspar77 chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
Sure, I'll enter!
Name: Katy Bent
Age(11-13): Just turned 12
Nationality: Her family is German, but she has lived in America ever since she was 3 months old.
Pet: A terrier named Percy
Relationship with others: Best friends with Weird Girl and gets along decently with everyone else, though she very rarely talks to Bob/
Love Interest*optional*: Hm...Can I have Toshiaki?
Elective(Drama, Music, Art, Science,etc...): Art
Clothing: Katy wears a purple and black striped T-shirt and a black skirt. SHe wears her hair in two braids down her back, one tied with purple ribbon and the other black ribbon. As for shoes, she has a pair of black sneakers that she usually wears.
Appearance: Katy is 5'5, tall for her age, with very dark brown hair that looks black, but you can see the brown when sun shines on it. She has hazel eyes.
Personality: Katy often seen reading and usually tends to so even through class at school, but manages to pay attention at the same times and occassionally makes remarks to the class out of nowhere, then just goes on reading.
Talents: Multi-tasking. A decent artist, but nothing special.
| Rian Havens chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
Name: Harriet Bane
Nationality: american/scottish (slight accent)
Pet: dog named Lucifer (boy dog)
Relationship to others: none really
Love interest: Nassor (pretty straight forward about it too! :D)
Elective: Art; music
Clothing: black and white striped long sleeve shirt with a black tee over the top; baggy black pants and black Coverse
Appearance: brown shaggy hair and bright green eyes
Personality: hyper, happy, fun loving (the opposite of Nassor basically) very expressionate and cares very much for her friends (which is basically everyone in town)
Talents: can draw really well and play bass, guitar and keyboard (in a band)
Please put me in, I adore Nassor! Thanks! :D
| Rian Havens chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
I would but I can't seem to log into my account. If you could keep Nassor saved for me until then, i'd be grateful. :)
| RandomEnigma chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
As I Browse through the review, I noticed all of the submitted characters, in the reviews at least, are all female, and so I decided to make mine, male.
Name:Jonathan Smith Albertson
Pet: a male St. Bernard named Arthur
Relationship with others: Despite being friendly, he does not have many friend, the only person he can call a "friend", other than his dog, is the weird girl, though they never mention that they know each other, unless if you ask, and they never "hang out" with each other, satisfied with only greeting each other when they meet and then moving on.
Love Interest*optional*: currently no one, but seems to have a fondness for the weird girl, considering her "Strangeness" as interesting.
Elective(Drama, Music, Art, Science,etc...): Art, Music, and Science.
Clothing: usually wears a gray jacket, with a blue inside shirt, navy blue jean which are folded at the bottom, and a pair of red sneakers.
Appearance: 5'7'' in height, has unusually well-tone muscles, has slightly tanned skin. his hair is black, reaches up to his neck and is styled like a "straight haired punk rocker". He has brown eyes and a scar on the bridge of his nose (from a guitar string accident).
Personality: solitary, lazy (in appearance), silent, dedicated, friendly, polite (mostly to girls), calm, and eccentric. Has a liking toward "strange" things and enjoys hiding in the shadows.
Talents: Guitar, Drums, Bagpipes, Painting, and Science
Others?: People always tend to not notice him, unless he makes his presence known.
| sunnettle12199 chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
Name: Liz Angelfeath
Pet: bird- name: ..Bird.
Relationship with others: Is quiet type, more if an introvert because she likes to be alone sometimes. Is always nice with everyone.
Love Interest*optional* Nassor. In some odd and particular way he looks nice and talks ravishing with his accent "It doethsn't"
Elective(Drama, Music, Art, Science,etc...):
Music and Art.
black Skirt, shoes, tie and feminine white blouse all the time.
Appearance: straight dark Brown hair, grayish eyes, oval face, earrings, hair is down with straight bangs, white hair band, medium sized lips, and normal weight with average body.
Personality: Can be quiet, likes to say things when only necessary. talks with an English accent and
Others?: Anything with art and creativeness.
| VladimirTheImpaler chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
Name: Isabella Knight
Pet: Husky (male) named Royal
Relationship with others: If you be mean to her she will be mean back. She gets along with weird girl,victor, and Nassor the best.
Love Interest*optional* Nassor
Elective(Drama, Music, Art, Science,etc...): Music she plays the Violin.
Clothing: White long sleeve shirt with a black vest. She wears a black skirt and knee lengh converse. She also wears fingerless gloves.
Appearance: Red hair, in a punk bob. She has light skin, and light blue eyes. She has a scar on her right eye going straight down. When smiling it looks like she has fangs.
Personality:Smart, quiet, stubborn and loyal. She has a very bad temper and loses somtimes very quickly.
Talents: Plays the violin, however she can't sing.
Others?: She hates P.E and would rather be anywhere else.
| Desire at gunpoint chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
Name: Helena Joanne Barenholtz
Pet: A pair of mice named Maddie and Liz (after Madeline Kahn and Elizabeth Taylor).
Relationship with others: She's very friendly towards Victor and Edgar, bringing them excess parts from her father's garage to make devices and such with. She has a crush on Edgar, enjoying the fact that he doesn't seem to care about what others think and that he has always been kind to her. She's good friends with Elsa, is nice to Weird Girl (although she thinks the strange girl is a slight threat to her chances with Edgar), doesn't like Toshiro and his allies ("Anyone who hurts others isn't a friend of mine."), and has an average relationship with everyone else.
She's very close to her father, Louis Barenholtz. Her mother and him seperated before her birth, so it's always been just them, along with the mice. He trusts her more than anyone, and she feels the same. Every Sunday, they will sit in the garage, talking and listening to music together while he works on cars.
Love Interest: Edgar.
Elective(Drama, Music, Art, Science,etc...): Music.
Clothing: Helena dresses in a strapless, sleeve-less dress that is white with little red polka-dots. She wears a red bow around her waist, and a pair of small red ballet slippers. She also wears a small red top hat cocked to the side of her head, and a golden Star of David necklace.
Appearance: Helena has fair skin with a set of noticeable freckles along her arms and the bridge of her nose. She has wide, staring grey eyes, with small, thin eyelashes. Her hair is brown and wavy and goes to her shoulders. She's about 4'9, and weighs 87 pounds. She has a slightly curvy figure, but not enough to be noticeable by all. Puberty has hit her very lightly so far, but she expects it to smack her upside the head when she's older.
Personality: Helena is a very motherly person, having spent her life helping to take care of her father, a mechanic who lost his left leg (from knee to toe) in war. She has a fervent passion for old movies, mostly political and psychological dramas, but likes sci-fi and horror just as well. She's very proud of her Jewish faith, and speaks almost perfect Hebrew and Yiddish along with her English (she's not a genius, she's just had a lot of practice). She's protective of Liz and Maddie, just as she is with her father, and will carry the mice with her where-ever she goes. She's vibrant and warm towards others, passing out genuine compliments as easily as some pass out insults.
Talents:Playing the guitar, Singing, Science.
Others?: As previously mentioned, she speaks Yiddish and Hebrew, and will often greet Victor and Edgar with "L'chaim!", meaning to "To life." as a reference to Sparky's resurrection.