Reviews for Critical Hour
Book girl fan chapter 20 . 6/18
You should write horror movies. Seriously, you carried the suspense in this so well, and gave just the right amount of comfort after the hurt instead of cutting out as soon as they were saved. The whole time, I was wondering if Regal would wake, if his associates would come, if Diana would make it in time, or if everything would just go wrong.

If you had ended the chapter in the middle of Peter's nightmare, I would have believed it, because you write so well and realistically.

I especially liked El and Peter being on entirely the same wavelength, right up to distracting the other with a phone call so they could talk to Neal. Brilliant stroke, that one, and you pulled it off so well, as well as Neal being unwillingly caught in the middle, but trying to do what's best for both.

The banter was also spot on, and the genuine affection on all sides. I loved how much June obviously cares for Neal, and that it is reciprocated in equal measure. I also liked how Neal cared that he ruined one of Byron's suits, and what that must mean to June, even if, from her perspective, they're more Neal's suits now.

In short, there are very few stories, of any fandom, that I have read and enjoyed as much as this one.
MargaritaS chapter 20 . 5/15
interesting
RachelRavenclaw16 chapter 20 . 3/9
Wow great work! I loved reading this and really appreciate the thought put into every conversation.
Jai Rose chapter 20 . 3/3
Okay, you've sold me even more on this bro-mance and I love these two more than I thought I should. After netflix binging, let me just tell you this is like chicken noodle soup to the soul.
Taylor chapter 20 . 2/13
Just joined this fandom incredibly late, but this is by far the best one I've read so far. Fantastic! Thank you for writing it.
Olivia chapter 20 . 8/23/2015
Just beyond amazing. Thank you for sharing your talent .xxxx
sirensbane chapter 12 . 8/3/2015
I am very much enjoying this chapter, just as I have the others. However, after being unconscious for that long, there is no way that Regal would be anywhere near this coherent. He should be stumbling around at least as badly as Neal. Losing consciousness and staying so for minutes at a time equals brain damage.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/6/2015
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Guest chapter 20 . 2/6/2015
Great story, I would've love to read a little more action at the end... Really enjoyed it:)
cosette141 chapter 1 . 1/26/2015
You. Are. So. Incredible. This is-and I'm not even talking about just fanfic-this is one of the greatest stories I've ever read! You have a gift, my friend! :)
xfphile chapter 20 . 4/19/2014
Okay, wow. This . . . this was incredible. I don't think I've ever in my life wanted to *hurt* someone as badly as I wanted to filet Regal and keep him conscious while I did it. You are an incredibly talented author and as soon as I wake up, I'm reading everything else you've ever written.

The only quibble I have with this entire story, in fact, is your - I'm actually going to say 'massive overuse' of the word G-d-. In the White Collar universe, it's utterly unnecessary and for myself personally, it's also highly offensive. And while one or two I can skip past, two or more *per chapter* is way, way too many uses for a show that seldom uses actual curse words.

Other than that, though, this story was spot-on in every way: tone, pacing, plot, characterization, and presentation. I truly cannot wait to see what else you've written, and thank you so much for sharing this with the White Collar world.
BookEmDanno50 chapter 20 . 2/14/2014
I just became a fan of White Collar and this is one of the first stories I read. I loved it. What an awesome story and I couldn't put it down. I'd finish one chapter and kept on saying "one more chapter". Keep up the great job.
Gonna go neb to see what else you have written
Kiratt chapter 1 . 2/9/2014
This was wonderfully written; I enjoyed the characterizations and the portrayal of Peter and Neal's frondship.
Zemby chapter 20 . 2/3/2014
After finishing this story, I just couldn't close the tab without leaving a review. This was one hell of a heart-pounding fanfic, and through some of the chapters (namely the ones with Regal) I could swear I held my breath through at least half of the chapter. You have a truly remarkable way with words and descriptions. The snippets of memories that surfaced in Peter's mind during conversations and the drifting sensation back to real life was seamless. I also felt that everybody stayed very in-character and true to their personalities. To put this all simply, I really enjoyed reading every word, and thank you for writing.
daisesndaffidols chapter 14 . 1/9/2014
I feel like I can breathe better with the two of them rescued!
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