Reviews for Critical Hour
Olivia chapter 20 . 8/23/2015
Just beyond amazing. Thank you for sharing your talent .xxxx
sirensbane chapter 12 . 8/3/2015
I am very much enjoying this chapter, just as I have the others. However, after being unconscious for that long, there is no way that Regal would be anywhere near this coherent. He should be stumbling around at least as badly as Neal. Losing consciousness and staying so for minutes at a time equals brain damage.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/6/2015
Guest chapter 20 . 2/6/2015
Great story, I would've love to read a little more action at the end... Really enjoyed it:)
cosette141 chapter 1 . 1/26/2015
You. Are. So. Incredible. This is-and I'm not even talking about just fanfic-this is one of the greatest stories I've ever read! You have a gift, my friend! :)
xfphile chapter 20 . 4/19/2014
Okay, wow. This . . . this was incredible. I don't think I've ever in my life wanted to *hurt* someone as badly as I wanted to filet Regal and keep him conscious while I did it. You are an incredibly talented author and as soon as I wake up, I'm reading everything else you've ever written.

The only quibble I have with this entire story, in fact, is your - I'm actually going to say 'massive overuse' of the word G-d-. In the White Collar universe, it's utterly unnecessary and for myself personally, it's also highly offensive. And while one or two I can skip past, two or more *per chapter* is way, way too many uses for a show that seldom uses actual curse words.

Other than that, though, this story was spot-on in every way: tone, pacing, plot, characterization, and presentation. I truly cannot wait to see what else you've written, and thank you so much for sharing this with the White Collar world.
BookEmDanno50 chapter 20 . 2/14/2014
I just became a fan of White Collar and this is one of the first stories I read. I loved it. What an awesome story and I couldn't put it down. I'd finish one chapter and kept on saying "one more chapter". Keep up the great job.
Gonna go neb to see what else you have written
Kiratt chapter 1 . 2/9/2014
This was wonderfully written; I enjoyed the characterizations and the portrayal of Peter and Neal's frondship.
Zemby chapter 20 . 2/3/2014
After finishing this story, I just couldn't close the tab without leaving a review. This was one hell of a heart-pounding fanfic, and through some of the chapters (namely the ones with Regal) I could swear I held my breath through at least half of the chapter. You have a truly remarkable way with words and descriptions. The snippets of memories that surfaced in Peter's mind during conversations and the drifting sensation back to real life was seamless. I also felt that everybody stayed very in-character and true to their personalities. To put this all simply, I really enjoyed reading every word, and thank you for writing.
daisesndaffidols chapter 14 . 1/9/2014
I feel like I can breathe better with the two of them rescued!
daisesndaffidols chapter 11 . 1/9/2014
I'm surprised that Neal is still conscious..I was hoping that P&N would get out of there, or Diana and crew would show up, before Regal woke up.. maybe Neal should tied him up
daisesndaffidols chapter 3 . 1/6/2014
Peter seems smarter then to go somewhere without backup...I really hope that Regal isn't planning on taking Neal with him
daisesndaffidols chapter 1 . 1/3/2014
You captured the banter between Neal and Peter perfectly! Very awesome!
But why does it seem that every time Peter has plans to take El out for dinner, something goes wrong?
PadyandMoony chapter 20 . 10/24/2013
I loved your story! This had me so hooked I couldn’t even stop to reexamine each chapter separately. And this is the El I miss and the relationship between Peter and Neak I miss! And the whole end of that conversation between El and Peter about what happened when Keller kidnapped him was so true even about Peter in prison. I just whish show El would remember that!

And June when Neal was feeling guilty! Awsome!

There are so many parts of this work that wanted to copy and paste here just so I could squee over them but unfortunately, I don’t know why, I haven’t been able to ever since that stupid google translator bar started showing up. So just know that I squeed through this entire fic!
Great work!
Rehabilitated Sith chapter 20 . 8/18/2013
;-). Wow.
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