Reviews for A Matter of Pride |
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![]() ![]() ![]() [continuation of story (script form)] (February 25, AC 216 [or AD 2983]) Heero: Guys! Guess what I found in the basement. Duo: What did you find? Heero: It's pretty heavy, but I had to use the freight elevator to get it up here. Quatre: A cryogenics pod? Trowa: The date indicator says "February 25, 2983". Wufei: Let's get this thing open! (Date indicator goes blank, pod opens) Heero: That was quick. ?: What time is it? Trowa: February 25, 2983! ?: How old am I? Quatre: We need your name first. ?: Joe Orsini. Duo: You're 1,000 years old. Joe: Who are you guys? Heero: I'm Heero Yuy. Duo: The name's Duo Maxwell. Trowa: Trowa Barton; nice to meet you. Quatre: Quatre Reberba Winner. Wufei: Wufei Chang; good to see you. Joe: Now that I'm still alive after all these years, let's celebrate my birthday with some pizza and a 2-liter bottle of Mountain Dew! (December 25, 2983) Joe: Let's see what we got for Christmas 2983! Heero: I'll go first. (Heero opens his gift) Heero: An MP3 player; now I can store some music files on this thing and play them wherever I go. Duo: I'm next! (Duo opens his gift) Duo: A laptop computer! Trowa: I'll open mine next. (Trowa opens his gift) Trowa: A CD case! Where are my CDs at? I'm tired of them getting scratched! (Joe clears his throat) Joe: That's where your second gift comes in. (Trowa opens the second gift) Trowa: These are the exact same CDs I got off the internet on my birthday. Quatre: Let's see what I got! (Quatre opens his gift) Quatre: A scale-model statue of Sandrock! Thanks, Joe! Joe: Even though it took me several weeks to get it finished, I had to get every last detail. Wufei: Okay. Let's see what I got from Santa. (Wufei opens his gift) Wufei: A photo of the 2015 New England Patriots. Joe: Tom Brady's holding the Lombardi Trophy. Heero: Let's see what you got, Joe! (Joe opens his gift) Joe: A Nintendo 64! (Joe opens his second gift) Joe: N64 sports games! (Joe opens his third gift) Joe: Four controllers! (Joe opens his fourth gift) Joe: 20 Controller Paks to save game data on! Duo: The console has an Expansion Pak in place of the annoying Jumper Pak, an Audio-Video cable, and a Power Pak that snaps firmly into the back of the console. [THE END] |
![]() ![]() This was so sad in the end. I really enjoyed it though. Good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you go through with the epic. I love your fics and good GW is so hard to find nowdays. |
![]() ![]() I can't wait to read the story where this beautiful jewel was spawned from |
![]() ![]() You are seriously my favorite GW author ever! Another wonderful read 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can I just reiterate... I'M THE MOST SPOILED BITCH ON THIS PLANET?! And I love you dearly for this! It's beautiful.. just what I wanted. The prose here ...just intoxicatingly pleasant and an absolute pleasure to read. You've really got this Heero POV in full swing and I cannot wait for the big project's unveiling! Really, truly.. thank you for this. It really is beautifully written and boasts of your unwavering abilities to capture the heart of a story already in full-swing. Love! |
![]() ![]() it's great. Can't wait for the larger project. I always love a dose of unrequited love on 01 part as long as they get together in the end. And the only reason i picked this up because you put heero yuy in character (even there's 6x2 in summary) that assured me of 1x2. I kind of find myself fall in love with heero pov fic. So yes, can't wait for the full blown plot (and heart ache) |