|Reviews for CONTENTED|
| Vampire Breath chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
dekha bachon agar waqt par zuban na kholi toh ap ki cheez koi or uda le jaye gaaaaaaaaaaaa:D
or abhijeet toh yeh deserve karta hai :p
| foreverknights28 chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
unusual thought expressed nicely. First when I started reading the story, I didn't understand wat was hapeening but wen read all the story, things were crystal clear. nice attempt. poor tarika have to wait for such a long to hear those words :(
Nice punishment to Abhi for whole life.
| Sunshine217 chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
cant hold my tears...:( but this is exactly the situation right now and u explained it really well
| Anon101 Pika chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
*holds back tears*
amazing story yaar. Amazing story.
That's basically all I can say right now.
Please write more stories soon!
| DF-Daya's Daredevil chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
some thing different than usual
but very nice idea... gr8 job
| Poesia-Riptide chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
Just for this, I'm gonna track you down and give you the world's biggest hug. The ending practically made me cry (khushi ke aansu! xD).
Ugh, I can't write any more... after reading this I really have to go jump up and down like an out-of-control kangaroo, squealing and gushing like those same crazy fangirls I find so unbearable. :')
| Abhirika's Lover chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
| 143CID-AbhiTarika chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
:O omg i truly don't know what to say... It's an amazing story and very emotional. It's also realistic in a way and made me shed a few tears. AWESOME
| abhirika luv chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
wow i felt like cryin it was really emotional nd ur storie r always gr8 nd dis story was also gr8 startin mein i culdn't understand anythin but climax mein i understood d hole story 1 more thin u explaind tarika's situation really very nicely it seemd sumwat realistic i likd dis sory it was emotional
| Originals143 chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
:'( :'( :'( I am sorry I just can't stop wailing! :'( Why? Why Tarika? Poor soul had to suffer for 4 whole years without getting ANYTHING in return! :'( Why do people blame the poor girl I don't know! :/
And your story? JUST. FABULOUS! :) You have written EXACTLY how the situation is in the show! Literally hats off to you for writing this! I am serious! :) Thank God atleast she got her much-deserved peace! :)
I guess Abhijeet realizes this atleast now that it is too late, and regrets that he shouldn't have kept her fooled for 4 long years! I will say a nice punishment for him! :) (Sorry fangirls! :P)
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
vry painful story...
bt i mst say tht its a gr8 atmpt...
i feel like crying while reading sm lines...
vry natural...& "dil ko choo diya "...
| DewDrop29 chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
It's dfficult to understand in start bt last ma sab smjh aa gaya it was nice & diffrent:)
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
that was very sweet...a different point of viev...very nice... :)