Reviews for Into the Minds of Innocence
D chapter 1 . 3/29
PANCAKES! TRANSLATION:Good story,but it needs pancakes...
Alaystus chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
Wow! Writing from Toroko's point of view... I'd never really thought of that! It puts an entirely different view on the whole matter, at least for me. (I'm playing Cave Story through... again... And I just got killed by frenzied Toroko. First death in the entire game. Angered me greatly. But when I go back, I will be more careful and delicate in the way I have to put down the young girl...) But definitely a job well done. Keep up the good work!
Sincerely,
Alaystus
Gamer chapter 1 . 9/5/2013
Hey! Great story, btw. Well, it wasn't really a story, but, I liked it. It was sad, though. Your TOTALY right, I don't think should have died... At all. I really liked the game, but I just wish that sooooooo many people- er, Mamiga, should have died... Anyway great... summary, I guess, I don't really know what to call it. (:
Anonymous chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
I agree, i mean, i always thought Toroko was a friend to Quote/Curly and didnt deserve to die in that way, if at all. What if you made a fanfic about cave story where Toroko didnt die, and the hero did CPR or something?
Melting Eye chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
*Claps* Yay!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
Short
Sweet
And to the point
Sueandyouequalst chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
dramatic in a good way. very saddening. when I first played the game I TOROKO would turn good after I defeated her. . . . . . . I can't believe how wrong I was. Now I know How she felt being slain by my hand. Thank you for writing this. Bye
Random-StoryKeeper chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
That part...is probably one of the worst moments of Cave Story EVER. You managed to capture it beautifully, and I love how Toroko still had some control of her own conscious thought while the rage took her. The fact that she couldn't control her own actions after that was heartbreaking.

I guess the only issue I had with this story is the spelling of Arthur's name. I don't recall seeing it spelled with an e, but it seems to be how you spelled it throughout the story.
Flamefox2 chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
*cries* I'll miss you... Toroko...

At least she's now with King... with Arthur...

...So sad... and so happy... *hugs you*