Reviews for After The Action
Ygrain33 chapter 8 . 4/14/2013
An interesting innovation, though I'm not sure if writing the whole story like this will relay the thrill and tension of the story. The details of the missions are known well enough, it is Shepard's reactions and interactions that make each individual story appealing, and I believe your story would benefit from incorporating more of these.
Mandalore the freedom chapter 8 . 1/14/2013
Good chapters and thanks I have been looking for that location of Red Nova base for a while and I had to skip since I could't find it oh well I guess I will do that in my next playthroungh and another then that keep up the great work dude till next time
PAR KOTE BAL IJAAT BE MAND'ALOR !
Mandalore the freedom chapter 5 . 1/14/2013
Mmm interesting dude keep up the good work
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Mandalore the freedom chapter 4 . 12/14/2012
Very interesting dude keep up the great work
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Mandalore the freedom chapter 3 . 11/21/2012
Interesting story though a little rush but interesting keep up the good work
PAR KOTE BAL IJAAT BE MAND'ALOR !