|Reviews for The Sun Sets in the West|
| eclairargent chapter 62 . 9/24
Excellent! I was hooked since chapter 1. Your characterization of Vezely is very strong, and, to me, it was believable. I love how you emphasize the difference in culture, especially in regards of honor and fulfilling it. And also how she (Vezely) tries to make a compromise between her Easterling side and her Elf side. The struggle, the confusion, and the conclusion. You tied all the loose ends of the story beautifully. Spent the whole weekend to read this story from the beginning until the last chapter. Bravo!
| ssooo chapter 62 . 6/26
i couldn't stop reading this ! oh goodness, it was an adventure and i really love reading each chapter. vezely is such a great character and i love her personality. i am glad she didn't change her ways after being released from the Halls :) i won't lie and say i didn't cry at certain points because i did! haha i enjoyed reading this through and through, and I'm most likely will be coming back to read it again in the future!
| AngelicRoses chapter 62 . 3/7
I just want to first of all say thank you. Thank you so very, very much for taking the time and the immense effort to write this story. It's beautiful, and heartfelt, and everything I never knew I had been looking for in a fanfic.
The moment I saw it, and read the first chapter, I knew there was something special about this story and I have absolutely no regrets in reading it. There were so many times where I had to stop, and take a moment to gather myself because I was becoming too emotionally affected by the events occurring in the story and that is simply a testament to your skill as an author; to evoke such strong reactions from your readers.
I loved Vezely and everything she represented; everything she fought so hard for. At the end of Chapter 51, I actually had tears in my eyes because it was arguably the most poignant moment in this story, and I say so because it is her final moment, her final battle, and her resolution was strongly felt.
Truly, thank you. This is a story I will re-read many, many times because it's masterful and wholesome. It was an epic of a story and you are an excellent storyteller.
| ellieloves2read chapter 62 . 1/5
I remembered that moment in Minas Tirith. I thought to myself, that vision was wonderful, and you made it come true in this chapter.
Life was good for them in Valinor. Thank you for giving us such a complete and fulfiling story about their life there. It was prefered over ending it when they were reunited on the beach.
However, long as it was, I'm still craving for more of your Legolas and Vezely journeys. Maybe, if you are so inclined, u would make more epilogues for this wonderful story. Their life with a growing son and so on. But if not and you'd rather end it as it was, thank you again for writing such a beautiful story.
The rest of my reviews will follow, with a longer interval, now that I'm no longer on leave.
| ellieloves2read chapter 61 . 1/5
Finally. Just… finally.
| ellieloves2read chapter 60 . 1/5
This chapter is divine.
Especially the part after the fight, that was marvelous. Well done!
| ellieloves2read chapter 59 . 1/5
Two hot spots:
Their time frolicking on the beach and
An angry Legolas
| ellieloves2read chapter 58 . 1/5
What I wouldn't do to make Legolas blush!
| ellieloves2read chapter 57 . 1/5
Ehehe, playful Legolas is the best!
| ellieloves2read chapter 56 . 1/4
Such a happy chapter. Loved her conversation with Thranduil! So funny, ehehe.
The last sentence was right on!
| ellieloves2read chapter 55 . 1/4
There it was. Finally, reunited at last. And what a reunion it was! So detailed was your words, I could imagine it vividly. Thank u. That was beautiful
| ellieloves2read chapter 54 . 1/4
The things I love the most is your attention to details! I love her time there, even without having met Legolas first.
Can't wait for the next chapter. I'm so glad I could read this again, it was one of the skimmed chapters
| ellieloves2read chapter 53 . 1/4
Soo, I shed a tear again when Legolas was crying while holding unto Vez's rhunic dress. I'm a weeper now, thanks to u
| ellieloves2read chapter 52 . 1/4
I jumped my re-reading quest, simply because it's 23:13 where I am and I have to work tomorrow and this chapter was skimmed before, for reasons u know why.
I was outraged before on my first reading, and skipped most of the words for my need to push "Next". Now re-reading it in whole, I'm not ashamed to say that I shed some tears. This is one emotional chapter. Kudos!
| ellieloves2read chapter 17 . 1/4
Another sweet interactions between these two. I love how his touches could soothe her