|Reviews for The Best Mistake|
| Guest chapter 18 . 1/31
I ran into the fandom late and wow, you are one hell of a writer. I'm sure you have heard this before but really, we readers should have given you a huge present for writing something this good.
| Munkeyfump20 chapter 18 . 1/14
Wow what a wonderful story thanks for a very good read i could not stop reading it I am definitely making this one of my favourites thanks again
| TunneyBaker chapter 18 . 7/27/2016
Finally I am done reading this great story! OMG! I love this angsty story! Well written indeed! I loved my rollercoaster ride through this story! I love those kind of stories where I get on to an emotional ride! Jane being an asshole to protect himself because of Red John! But he finally get his act together with a beautifull happy ending! You are right about your "fat pornostar" line I loved it! I also knew that I love this story although it is much about their kid! Still it won't be a baby/kid fic! I don't like baby/kid fics! But Alaina had to be in there because she was part of the plot! Thank you for NOT making it a baby/kid fic! What I loved was that Jane's contract warmed my cold heart! There were times when I wanted to kill Jane (but I wanted to do it in the show too... Lorelei and Pike episodes). But he comes to his senses in the end... like in the show! I think that Jane wasn't OOC even though I couldn't imagine he would abandon any woman being pregnant with his child and ask for abortion respectively! But to be honest Jane is so terrified that Red John would hurt the people Jane loved most! I can definitely understand that Jane couldn't go through twice that his child (and/or Lisbon) could have been killed by Red John! So this is the reason why I don't think Jane was OOC! Jane would have been OOC if Red John was dead already but he wasn't in this story! Finally I have to admit as much as I love these kind of angsty stories I would have never survived if this kind of story would have been in the show! Thank you, Bruno Heller! But in fanfiction I am definitely spoiled and love to read angsty-fluff-happy Jisbon ending all-in-one! Off to start reading Lavinia now! Thank you for The Best Mistake!
| nobody suspicious chapter 1 . 2/3/2016
Just started reading it and I am hooked! Brilliant plot line. I can see Jane being a jerk due to his past etc but he better get his act sorted!
| Edelweisss chapter 18 . 9/26/2015
Finally ! I've finally found it ! I began to read it weeks ago but I couldn't remember the name ! I finished it now and it's a wonderful fanfiction ! I took grat pleasure reading it, everything was on point, I found jane's reaction to pregnancy heartbreaking and believable and Lisbon was as strong and herself as ever ! Thank you I really loved it !
| Shoesarecool chapter 18 . 7/18/2015
This was an amazing story! The ending was beautiful and perfect !
| Cutebeekeeper chapter 17 . 7/3/2015
Hooray! We finally got the happy ending! This was so good - so angsty, but so good! I must say, however, that had this story line actually happened on TM, I think I would have truly died - this was worse than Lorelei or Pike! (Are you related to Bruno Heller?)
Anyway, it was a fantastic read! Thank you!
| Nelapl chapter 18 . 7/2/2015
This story was perfect right from the beggining. And you kept that quality up to the end. Thank you for that :).
| Nelapl chapter 9 . 7/1/2015
Oh my God! You are geniues! Obviously, I've found your story just recently, and I'm enchanted by this one. I love everything about it. The plot, main characters (how you've described Jane and Lisbon, and of course Grace, Rigsby and Cho), the long and beautiful chapters, and the fact that almost in every chapter there is this moment when I become speechless. I love this story to this point where I'm not allowing myself to read it too fast :). You know, like with a good book. When you wish it would last long, I mean the pleasure of reading it? Unfortunately I'm on chapter 9'th, so The End is closer and closer...
| uiytrcgvhbvyi chapter 4 . 3/7/2015
"I'm too fat to be a porn star" I LAUGHED SO HARD IN PUBLIC.
But in those flashbacks Jane is being a class A bastard.
| uiytrcgvhbvyi chapter 3 . 3/7/2015
Patrick Jane you piece of scum! (just kidding I love you) BUT HOW COULD HE TREAT HER LIKE THAT! THE SELFISH BASTARD!
| uiytrcgvhbvyi chapter 2 . 3/6/2015
Sort of redeeming himself here. That contract was quite adorable
| uiytrcgvhbvyi chapter 1 . 3/6/2015
JANE YOU SON OF A BITCH
| Justfilwt chapter 18 . 3/3/2015
Just a quick comment to let you know I enjoyed reading this story! Thanks for writing it. :)
| Bethy1416 chapter 18 . 1/13/2015
WOW. 220 000 words later and I still don't know how to get my head around this. I'm not usually one for this type of fic but I'm completely won over. Throughout the 18 chapters, at various intervals, you said people had a bad attitude towards this fic and I just wanted you to know, I don't understand! I thought everything you wrote was for a reason, sure I wasn't as happy about some things but I *enjoyed* reading it! I understand people are entitled to their opinions, but I know how bad reviews can hurt a writer's feelings (I've had some experience myself). Sorry, this is extremely long but take it as an entire book review, rather than chapter! Thanks so much for this, thoroughly enjoyed :D