Reviews for The Best Mistake
consulting and insulting chapter 4 . 3/7
"I'm too fat to be a porn star" I LAUGHED SO HARD IN PUBLIC.
But in those flashbacks Jane is being a class A bastard.
consulting and insulting chapter 3 . 3/7
Patrick Jane you piece of scum! (just kidding I love you) BUT HOW COULD HE TREAT HER LIKE THAT! THE SELFISH BASTARD!
consulting and insulting chapter 2 . 3/6
Sort of redeeming himself here. That contract was quite adorable
consulting and insulting chapter 1 . 3/6
JANE YOU SON OF A BITCH
Justfilwt chapter 18 . 3/3
Just a quick comment to let you know I enjoyed reading this story! Thanks for writing it. :)
Bethy1416 chapter 18 . 1/13
WOW. 220 000 words later and I still don't know how to get my head around this. I'm not usually one for this type of fic but I'm completely won over. Throughout the 18 chapters, at various intervals, you said people had a bad attitude towards this fic and I just wanted you to know, I don't understand! I thought everything you wrote was for a reason, sure I wasn't as happy about some things but I *enjoyed* reading it! I understand people are entitled to their opinions, but I know how bad reviews can hurt a writer's feelings (I've had some experience myself). Sorry, this is extremely long but take it as an entire book review, rather than chapter! Thanks so much for this, thoroughly enjoyed :D
Gesa Martins chapter 1 . 12/15/2014
Não consigo traduzir pra ler. O que eu faço?
refusetoshine chapter 18 . 6/15/2014
Reding this story from start to finish in a few days was such a delight! Such a beautiful beautiful story. There was moments I wanted to kill Jane more than I do whilst watching the show! And I was also angry with Lisbon for for forgiving him! I'm a bit like grace and held a grudge! But you did it so well and showed the whole process, I'm so happy with how it ended. Well done. You are a talent writer!
Guest chapter 18 . 3/14/2014
I'm getting all emotional- at the start it was so intence I had no idea how you'd get to here but props to you, you did it with the flare and style of the amazing writer you are!
At the end of chapter 17 I was a blubbering MESS I'm pretty much I choked out the words "I just- I just feel like I've got... Like I've got closure!" through my tear-filled hysterics
- jasmin x
KimmyH chapter 18 . 1/11/2014
I just reread this. It happens to be my favorite story of all The Mentalist stories out there. Absolutely LOVE it and just had to let you know. Any plans to write about Alaina again? Also I was very committed to reading Poison and Wine. Any plans to finish it? I love hallucination Lisbon! But of course I read everything you write. I'm about to read the one you're writing with Donnamour!
Sssssy chapter 18 . 1/8/2014
Awesome! It's a really good story.
I could not stop to read it even if for it, I went to bed very very late!
Thank you for writing such a lovely story.
yalyssa chapter 18 . 11/10/2013
This was a very good and very long read. Thanks for not making it sappy and cheesy. Nice writing.
sigofh chapter 4 . 8/20/2013
I have to be honest. Yeah Jane can shut Lisbon out. After the trauma who can blame him? But if she or anyone was pregnant with HIS child, no way in hell would he abandon or say get an abortion. Aside from that this is a good story but Jane is so OOC it is hard to stand this story. And Lisbon is such a victim and painting herself as one (yeah it might be just to do it against Jane) but to drag her entire team in to it? telling them he wanted an abortion? really? I am questioning her motives. Her trying to control his visits either let him in or not at all. She is clearly punishing him not protecting their baby. So passive aggressive and unLisbon like too. You're a good writer but the plot is awful and unlikable but more improbable. Jane is excited as hell when he sees any baby/child of course he has issues if he did have another family but he wouldn't do this. I truly don't see him being capable of it like you say. He almost always has a reason when he acts cold and it is never to hurt her personally. They have a partnership truly especially with him being forthcoming. He has never stepped over Lisbon personally to get RJ or use her as a friend quite the opposite when you count him killing the guy who could have led to Red John and saving her life.
we will all be tested chapter 18 . 5/8/2013
I loved this so much! Your writing is fantastic
Terezinha chapter 18 . 4/28/2013
I just loved this fic,I'm just sad that reached the it could have part we'll see if Jane was really a hit boy.
Loved loved it,Congratulations on the beautiful fic.
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