|Reviews for The Best Mistake|
| Edelweisss chapter 18 . 9/26
Finally ! I've finally found it ! I began to read it weeks ago but I couldn't remember the name ! I finished it now and it's a wonderful fanfiction ! I took grat pleasure reading it, everything was on point, I found jane's reaction to pregnancy heartbreaking and believable and Lisbon was as strong and herself as ever ! Thank you I really loved it !
| Shoesarecool chapter 18 . 7/18
This was an amazing story! The ending was beautiful and perfect !
| Cutebeekeeper chapter 17 . 7/3
Hooray! We finally got the happy ending! This was so good - so angsty, but so good! I must say, however, that had this story line actually happened on TM, I think I would have truly died - this was worse than Lorelei or Pike! (Are you related to Bruno Heller?)
Anyway, it was a fantastic read! Thank you!
| Nelapl chapter 18 . 7/2
This story was perfect right from the beggining. And you kept that quality up to the end. Thank you for that :).
| Nelapl chapter 9 . 7/1
Oh my God! You are geniues! Obviously, I've found your story just recently, and I'm enchanted by this one. I love everything about it. The plot, main characters (how you've described Jane and Lisbon, and of course Grace, Rigsby and Cho), the long and beautiful chapters, and the fact that almost in every chapter there is this moment when I become speechless. I love this story to this point where I'm not allowing myself to read it too fast :). You know, like with a good book. When you wish it would last long, I mean the pleasure of reading it? Unfortunately I'm on chapter 9'th, so The End is closer and closer...
| consulting and insulting chapter 4 . 3/7
"I'm too fat to be a porn star" I LAUGHED SO HARD IN PUBLIC.
But in those flashbacks Jane is being a class A bastard.
| consulting and insulting chapter 3 . 3/7
Patrick Jane you piece of scum! (just kidding I love you) BUT HOW COULD HE TREAT HER LIKE THAT! THE SELFISH BASTARD!
| consulting and insulting chapter 2 . 3/6
Sort of redeeming himself here. That contract was quite adorable
| consulting and insulting chapter 1 . 3/6
JANE YOU SON OF A BITCH
| Justfilwt chapter 18 . 3/3
Just a quick comment to let you know I enjoyed reading this story! Thanks for writing it. :)
| Bethy1416 chapter 18 . 1/13
WOW. 220 000 words later and I still don't know how to get my head around this. I'm not usually one for this type of fic but I'm completely won over. Throughout the 18 chapters, at various intervals, you said people had a bad attitude towards this fic and I just wanted you to know, I don't understand! I thought everything you wrote was for a reason, sure I wasn't as happy about some things but I *enjoyed* reading it! I understand people are entitled to their opinions, but I know how bad reviews can hurt a writer's feelings (I've had some experience myself). Sorry, this is extremely long but take it as an entire book review, rather than chapter! Thanks so much for this, thoroughly enjoyed :D
| Gesa Martins chapter 1 . 12/15/2014
Não consigo traduzir pra ler. O que eu faço?
| refusetoshine chapter 18 . 6/15/2014
Reding this story from start to finish in a few days was such a delight! Such a beautiful beautiful story. There was moments I wanted to kill Jane more than I do whilst watching the show! And I was also angry with Lisbon for for forgiving him! I'm a bit like grace and held a grudge! But you did it so well and showed the whole process, I'm so happy with how it ended. Well done. You are a talent writer!
| Guest chapter 18 . 3/14/2014
I'm getting all emotional- at the start it was so intence I had no idea how you'd get to here but props to you, you did it with the flare and style of the amazing writer you are!
At the end of chapter 17 I was a blubbering MESS I'm pretty much I choked out the words "I just- I just feel like I've got... Like I've got closure!" through my tear-filled hysterics
- jasmin x
| KimmyH chapter 18 . 1/11/2014
I just reread this. It happens to be my favorite story of all The Mentalist stories out there. Absolutely LOVE it and just had to let you know. Any plans to write about Alaina again? Also I was very committed to reading Poison and Wine. Any plans to finish it? I love hallucination Lisbon! But of course I read everything you write. I'm about to read the one you're writing with Donnamour!