| Reviews for What came next |
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   cyberfrogX chapter 5 . 4/3/2003 interesting, besides a few grammer mistakes it was good |
| pookie bear chapter 4 . 8/25/2002 pretty good! keep on writing! |
| Legolas French Horn West chapter 1 . 8/25/2002 Um, this is the author of PERSEPHONE'S DAUGHTER, a story you reviewed earlier...well, in the author's note at the beginning of my story, I say this story is based on a number of books, including GODDESS OF YESTERDAY. No hard feelings, it's an honest mistake, but it would be a good idea to read the author's notes BEFORE you review. I like your story. |
| LiZz chapter 4 . 8/24/2002 I really loved chapters 1 and 2 but 3 was a little confusing. Post the 4th chapter soon its really good. |
| Lil' Hermione chapter 3 . 8/22/2002 KEEP GOING KEEP GOING! THIS IS GREAT! |
| Alicia chapter 3 . 8/22/2002 ummm you messed up...this was a previous chapter...oops! |
| pookie bear chapter 2 . 8/17/2002 do great so far! can't wait till the next chap. comes out! keep on writing! ~pookie bear |
| cyberfrogX chapter 1 . 7/24/2002 Great story, not much anything i can say bad about it, continue ASAP! PLEASE! |
| Anonymous9 chapter 1 . 7/24/2002 one, you should let anonymous reviews, two, if this is your first fic, then u did a great job! try to make the paragraphs more visible in the dream. i know there is a lot of speaking Love IT |
| A Writer Blocked chapter 1 . 7/24/2002 Hmmmmmmmm This is your first fic. Wow, its better than all my fics. You have a very good start here. You could do something very good with it. I'm not good at telling people what they do wrong, so I'm just going to say that your fic is really good so far. Keep it up. |