Reviews for Blue Christmas
Citrine x chapter 5 . 12/24/2013
argh! I love this story! Its so sad but so good! Xx
Guest chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
Plz update
Guest chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
Please update
Wish On Every Star For Me chapter 5 . 2/2/2013
It's really great. So cool can't wait for chapter 6
BlueJay026 chapter 5 . 2/2/2013
Awesome! Thank you for updating this! This story's so cool!

Oh no, Shaiden remembers everyone but Thorne! What are they gonna do now?

Keep on writing! I want to check out the next chapter!
akl110998233 chapter 5 . 2/2/2013
Great chapter. A little out of the season but who cares. Update soon.
akl110998233 chapter 4 . 12/16/2012
OMG the start is really sad. Glad Thorne survived
BlueJay026 chapter 4 . 12/3/2012
WOO-HOO! THORNE'S ALIVE!

I loved this chapter! Please update this again soon! I wanna know what happens next!

May I offer a few suggestions? I think that what might help your stories a little bit would be if you seperated those huge paragraphs into smaller ones, and put those speaking parts on their own line.

God made you a very creative writer! Keep it up!
lsgirl988 chapter 3 . 11/23/2012
this is what Ruby looks like by the way! imgres?um1&hlen&saN&tbod&biw1366&bih651&authuser0&tbmisch&tbnidg5In5GGQO0z_qM:& %3Fp%3D5740&docidyU0xbIrm_SOO5M& . &w584&h600&eiDI6vUOS9ONC30QHVuYC4Dw&zoom1&iacthc&vpx1102&vpy192&dur63&hovh228&hovw221&tx188&ty168&sig112757627142035371054&page1&tbnh153&tbnw148&start0&ndsp18&ved1t:429,r:17,s:0,i:138
BlueJay026 chapter 3 . 11/20/2012
I liked Gildar's sacrificial moment in the Stockade there, very nice!

Update again soon!
BlueJay026 chapter 2 . 11/19/2012
Ooh, cliffhanger! Is Thorne really dead? And who was that green guy? DESTROY HIM!

Update when you can! I wanna know what happens next!
lsgirl988 chapter 2 . 11/19/2012
Now I know what you are thinking but I have more suprises up my sleave. Maybe a love interest for 2 defenders. Maybe a jealous Bird. Maybe more siblings. you never know!
lsgirl988 chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
Aww thank You and yes I will be updating pretty regularly
BlueJay026 chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
Awesome! I really liked Kook's last comment there. Are you gonna update this? Please?

I wonder why six of the original Defenders left? I'm warming up to the new ones, but I still miss the others.

By the way, you've gotten a lot better with your sentence structure. Great job! Keep it up!