|Reviews for Set Yourself on Fire|
| millie.zhang chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
great job MAC.
She should have done this 5 YEARS AGO
| Katycat1970 chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
awwww - great to see another one from you... :)
Arrrggghhh - I don't like Brian - I don't know if I've ever mentioned this? (only about 1000 times on this site)... but I don't like Brian...
Anyway, well done Mackenzie - right thing to do!
Loved this line... "I've already made this mistake. I don't need to make it again. I already know how much I love you." and I love Will's reaction to this line - a smile and a kiss... awww - so glad to see the total trust there...
Great stuff & you can write decent endings! Any ending where Mac totally dumps brian is more than decent!
Thanks for posting...
| SerialStoryLover chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
Oh shush! Your stories are fab and if your endings were terrible they wouldn't be so shh and be more confident ;) We all love them and want you to write more asap! :p
I adore the bit where she says "I don't need to make it again. I already know how much I love you." Haha Brian - scary thing is, I can actually see him doing this. I think Mackenzie would change, but I'm nowhere near as optimistic about Brian. Fingers crossed that one day Aaron will write us a lovely episode where Brian gets more of a sendoff from Will than The American Taliban.
Great job :D
| lilacmermaid33 chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
So glad to see more from you so soon!
I LOVE that Mac told Will, but it kind of makes me nervous that she hid the fact she was going to see Brian.