Reviews for At First Meeting
LouiseKurylo chapter 29 . 2/6
What a great set-up for a sequel. Excellent introduction of Red John into the story. DK if your alternative path would be enough for RJ to target Jane and his family, but I shudder to even contemplate that possibility.

Thank you for the hours of enjoyment.
LouiseKurylo chapter 28 . 2/6
Original. Most fan fics portray Angela as an angel. She's much more interesting cast against type. Given the amoral, fluid carny life, it's also more realistic. Jane had to change for the better. Angela never changed.
LouiseKurylo chapter 20 . 2/6
Terrific chapter. Perfectly outrageous, perfectly Jane. But then I repeat myself. This story deserves a lot more applause (reviews). I am so happy to have come upon it.
LouiseKurylo chapter 7 . 2/6
Patrick Jane, thy middle name is indirection. Yes, they would (will?) somehow have to reconcile his conman ways with her straight laced, soon to be cop persona. But there are also hearts to protect from breaking. Nicely handled.
LouiseKurylo chapter 3 . 2/5
Rough reaction, but realistic. Ordinarily, a con man would take people on the straight and narrow like Lisbon to the cleaners. Lisbon isn't so affluent that she can afford to be taken.
LouiseKurylo chapter 2 . 2/5
Placing the SCU team together as teenagers isn't a favorite format, but I'm really enjoying this. Very natural and (the younger versions of) all of them are perfectly in character. Love your descriptions of how carnival scams work.
Munkeyfump20 chapter 29 . 1/9
Nice story but I think there could be more to this but thanks for a very good read
Chocolate498 chapter 21 . 2/14/2014
i honestly don't think that you know how brilliant and funny this story is! Especially the last chapter! Brilliant :)
Angels-heart1 chapter 29 . 10/12/2013
Great story! I loved it! I can't think of anything else to say. "I loved it" kind of covers everything.
Guest chapter 29 . 4/28/2013
Love this story! I think that you should write a few more chapters :)
Horses-are-my-life chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
Neat
SarcasmAndAPen chapter 29 . 2/15/2013
Thanks for the ride! Looking forward to your next story!
Zizou chapter 20 . 1/20/2013
Woow what was that! It such a good idea! I almost believed that she would say no but she couldn't with Charli in front of her :). Your just amazing I love this story!
xxx
IfYouLoveSomeoneYouTellThem chapter 21 . 1/22/2013
Great chapter. I really like the way you are writing Grace in this I think that's just how she would have been with Patrick to start with
Guest chapter 16 . 1/9/2013
is it an alliance? :D
I'm sorry but I'm french and i don't have a lot of vocabulary .. x)
But I loooove your fiction! So exciting about reading the next chapter! you do a good job!
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