Reviews for Chill
ebfiddler chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
Very nice! I like how the coat and the hot chocolate speak the unsaid words, and make the feelings known.
Bytemite chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
Aw. I liked the scene with Kaylee and Jayne. Sometimes it's hard to write Kaylee with her rascallyness and mischief, it can be easy to overexaggerate her sweetness. And of course Mal and Inara, and a perfectly suitable story for this season. But why are her hands cold? Something left unsaid here.
TheAmazingDave chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
I could definitely go for more Mal/Inara fluff from you! Are you planning some post - BDM stories featuring these two?