ya need too hurry up with the update man I need my fix! this fic is so good!

Ok I'm sorry but ur story is just to depressing for me I usually start reading when I'm depressed already so reading depressing story's is not my thing I will admit ur story is well thought out but with my already depressed mood I honestly feel like I should give up on humanity but I feel as if, I stick around something interesting will happen so I mainly only live to see what's around the corner so I'm sorry but ur story is just not for me my be I'll read some of ur work another time

I was not ready for the feels trip. WHERE WAS MY PERMISSION SLIP, NO CONSENT WAS GIVEN FOR THE FEELS TRIP. I actually cried... first ever story on this site to do that to me ... Good on ya

Lemon NaruErza please... great history

This is exceedingly well done. Reading about Naruto and Erza first meeting and how both they and their relationship grow and mature over the years gives their characters and the romance depth you seldom see in...any story, not just fanfiction. I also like the consistency. Naruto's traumatic background isn't just this bad thing he leaves behind or one big revelation away from being totally ignorable, it is something he continues to struggle with and gradually move past.

Koyuki is also super adorable.

Ok what?

From the start of the fic, Naruto is basically an emotionless killing machine. But then in the Tower he suddenly gets a moral compass and has a brighter personality? That is a radical change that usually takes time to develop. Erasing his old persona and quickly plopping in a new one really makes Naruto look more artificial.

Amazing chapter

the only thing that bothers me about this story is the use of Japanese honorifics. If the Japanese language doesnt exist in the Fairy Tail universe then why are they using prefixes from that language? If you could explain with a reason pls do. I still like this story

Out of curiosity, is anyone else from the shinobi world going to cross over?

When you finish this arc add more lemon from NaruErza this is a good story greetings ...

Well, things are heating up. Erza is poisoned, and as the Alliance tries to find Wendy, Orsis Sect attacks. Yet when Nurvania is activated, I wonder if Naruto will turn 'evil'. It will be interesting how everyone handles an 'evil' Naruto.

.

Hey man cant wait for the next chapter, this has been a epic read.

Back again I see. Good to have you.

very good