|Reviews for Halfway|
| Aki-Mad Hatter chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
Aww..SO CUTE! Your fic is so cute,beautiful and amazing!First time writing Franada? Aww..What can I say? You truly are talented so don't let your talent go to more when you have time and of course..share with us! I am truly excited to read more of your ! 3 3 3
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
This was such an adorable story! Did you base it off a song? Or is the little blurp at the end something you came up with yourself? This was so much fun to read, thank you U
| JulietGivesUp chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
Lovely story and Canada is as darling as ever.
My only critique is the over-emphasis of Francis' accent. It's a bit hard reading the dialogue with all the 'zis' and 'zat.' It's wonderful, and even daring to try writing the countries' accents but the sentences will flow more fluidly if you tone it down a bit. Perhaps substitute in French phrases or words to accentuate Francis' French-ness. Though I highly disapprove Google translator - the phrases are structured incorrectly and there are many forms and grammar rules that the translator doesn't take into consideration.