Loved it!

Awesome update :)

maybe some words of encouragement will help. This has been a good read for me in the past 2 nights, I noticed you have school and that's one of the reasons you are losing your muse once in a while. I just hope, you'll find it again cause damn. That peak is making me think that Jaime must've gotten Syl back home.

I am loving this story! More please?!

Love this story! Please continue:)

Sylvia resembles Robert A LOT in this scene and not in a good way at all. The poor baby must have been through a lot for her to act in such a way. It makes me nervous to think of what exactly Cersei and Joffrey did to her to make her so bitter. And I have a sinking feeling it has something to do with harming Robb and Mini.:-[ Phenomenal preview, I need more!

Don't you dare say your writing is bad! The most recent chapters are just as good as the first, in fact, I think it always just gets better. Hang in there and just keep writing the way you do, because it's amazing!

Love the story please continue!

I love this story. I truly do. Sylvia is very well characterized. I just hope for the sake of my heart she's able to side with Robb. I see both of their sides. I'm just tired of seeing him die. Robb/OC stories are truly my favorite. You're on my favorites list. I'm an author with an addiction to fan fiction. I can't wait for more. - Helena

Out of all that I have read, I like this 'Robert's OC daughter' fanfiction the best. I hope that this exact flow of the story continues.

Loved this chapter.

P.S. So is Sylvia going to go with Robb to the south, or not?

Just update damn you, you are finally at the war! You've done well thus far, but the story requires a continuation, so why not give it what it, you and we need? You in order to get it out there, and us so that we could see how this turns out?

16/?

Great story, great characters, one of the most well written and thought out fanfiction I've ever read, and I'm glad to find a halfway decent firstborn story for GoT. Please update soon

I don't think you wrote her OOC. I mean nobody is born evil and I really much can perfevtly imagine that Cersei was like you described her. I already really love yours story and dread the minute I will read the last updated chapter

I love your chapter title! And as for the chapter, I loved it! The drama is great! Originally I was siding with Robb's view, but now I see both Sylvia and Robb have a fair side of the argument, I like how they each handled it their own way. Robb kept his cool and tried to work things out, and Sylvia just drank. Haha, I love her. She's a perfect oc for Robert's daughter.

Aww, I loved Theon / Robb scene! So fun to read, humor is refreshing in Got. I wish we could have seen more Theon / Robb interactions in the Got/Asoiaf. I'm glad we have your fanfic!

That was such a heartwarming ending. Their love is stronger than all that jazz. Wow, your story is approaching the war, I am excited for what comes next. Oh, I can't wait, I hope we get to see Stanis or Renly! And more of the Stark family trio! 3

A chapter as beautifully written as always. :) No pressure, but I hope you can update soooon.
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