|Reviews for Better Angels Of Our Nature|
| Green Penguin chapter 1 . 2/2
do you have more of this lurking about on your hard drive, because I'd love to see it-interesting take on the characters and I gotta wonder where cap comes in and what would happen there. neat to see all these interactions and theories. can't wait to read more if you still have it.
| Green Penguin chapter 2 . 8/11/2014
hey, is there more of this lurking about on your hard drive somewhere, because I'd love to read it. its a different take to the whole situation and interesting-keep it up!
| Alibi Nonsense chapter 1 . 4/22/2014
Backing up my previous review, I have just realised that I was laughing at a story about a depressed lunatic with mental issues. That is not good. I apologise. However... in my defense, he is (no offense) supposedly fictional and being co-treated by Tony Stark. This sort of justifies the laughter part in my mind, but maybe not really in anybody else's.
Just so you know, I laughed at the bits that (I hope were) meant to be funny... rather than at the 'I-will-die-of-angst' Loki-thing that he kept doing.
I also like the fact that he's under there somewhere... and you're doing a really good job of showing it, btw.
| Alibi Nonsense chapter 2 . 4/22/2014
I just love this: it's so funny already and still only two chapters in! XD
| cal chapter 1 . 3/19/2014
I seriously loved reading this. And I desperately wish you would continue this.
| Nobody chapter 2 . 2/4/2014
Aww, it's a pity you never went back to this. It's an excellent fiction! I love your writing style. You depict Loki's madness very well, it doesn't seem cheesy or weak. Could I beg of you to write another chapter, even if it's just a conclusion? It's such an enjoyable story, I would love to see it finished.
| Hilda78 chapter 2 . 12/6/2013
More please, it's been a year.
| Avatar Aang chapter 2 . 12/6/2013
Love it love it love it love it live it more more more more please please please please please xxxxxxxxxx
| Vanellea chapter 2 . 11/18/2013
I absolutely adore this fanfiction. It's everything I could want and more! I love the interactions between the characters because I feel like this is how they would truly behave in these circumstances. Especially Tony, with his tendencies towards making jokes and sarcastic remarks to try to cover up how uncomfortable the situation that he is finding himself in is making him. Loki is also written in a very believable way, especially in his interactions with Thor in this chapter. I really hope that you update this soon.
| Baow chapter 2 . 10/5/2013
Why is this not updating? Must update. Please.
| ClaMiAl chapter 2 . 10/1/2013
Cool story! I love the angst and the whump! And your depiction of the various characters was pretty cool, too. I especially love the scenes written from Loki's point of view, that showed what was going on in his head. Fascinating.
Now that we know what's actually wrong with Loki, I can't wait to see what they'll do to help/fix him. I'm really looking forward to reading more of this story!
| CheshireCat19 chapter 2 . 6/29/2013
This is amazing...they should use this in the next movie I mean the way your going is just awesome and how tony understood made me sooo happy anyway I can't wait for more
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/7/2013
ooo so fu*$%%$ good ! please keep going on with it
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/22/2013
I absolutely love this story! The viewpoints and the interactions are wonderfully written. I'm guessing since it's been half a year, this story is not being finished, but I would love to read more if you continue writing! Thanks
| LokiLaufeyson222 chapter 2 . 5/19/2013
I love this!
Are you going to continue?