|Reviews for A Dance of Letters|
| Vincent Corley chapter 79 . 1/17
| Vincent Corley chapter 34 . 1/17
As a avid manga reader (along with many books in varying genres) and heavy anime watcher I see that you convey the true nature of the characters rather well it's almost as if it comes right from the original creator of the series the only flaw I see is while from the readers view it's obvious that the visions connect the two (Naruto and Hinata) there is a slight plot issue in how it occurs due to it to no interaction between the two however I think I see where you are placing that due to hints from minato concerning "Narutos kushina" but this is a very very good read and I'm very much enjoying it and binge reading it
| Vincent chapter 23 . 1/17
I'm only on the beginning of chapter 24 however this is actually a very well written story that seems to combine the manga/anime bleeding through to a second dimension that is seen in the form of the forces it's interesting and I can't wait to see how it unfolds
| Requiescat1nPace chapter 1 . 10/24/2017
You gotta get some grammar skills, man.
| Fender Pick chapter 1 . 3/20/2014
The first thing i thought about after reading your description wasnt about the wonderful poetry or any of that sort. It was:
"Dude, Are you – like – high?"
| Ayrmed chapter 52 . 3/20/2014
Does that mean something's escalating?
| licilovesanime chapter 51 . 2/10/2014
Okay some times your story confuses the hell out me. Why is Hinata trying to avoid Naruto? Will they ever meet? I'm still confused on this whole connection with dreams and the Secret Admirer letters she writes. And keeping Sasuke and Sakura's relationship is confusing too. I know that's how they all got involved but shouldn't Naruto think something's up? Please explain the story plot so far to me so i can really understand cuz i only get so much.
| Ayrmed chapter 42 . 12/20/2013
This is such an unusual story.
| Ayrmed chapter 41 . 12/12/2013
This story always keeps me thinking. Good chapter again
| Shadow vortex chapter 39 . 11/23/2013
After dialogue you need to say who said it. Like you do it sometime but not all the time and that sort of makes it confusing. Wish you would of did more naruto action though, but good chapter.
| Ayrmed chapter 39 . 11/23/2013
It's such an unusual story I can't help wanting to read more.
| Shadow Vortex chapter 35 . 10/10/2013
Just Shadow Vortex works and you did good on the PoV. Also I could be wrong but spit-take is when something totally ridiculous happens while drinking something and you spray it everywhere. As always it was a treat to read another chapter of this great story and as a faithful reader the criticism isn't a problem seeing just seeing as the problem wasn't that bad. Anyway anticapting the next update.
| Shadow Vortex chapter 34 . 10/7/2013
I always meant to review this just never got to it until I saw how many reviews you had and almost did a spit-take. This is a great story I read it since it first started, while I was sketchy of it at first over how it is formatted I still wanted to read more now I sit at the edge of my seat for an update. Now back to format, if you could just add in who PoV it is at the time it would be good and maybe some better character development please for these OCs. I can't wait for part 2.
| licilovesanime chapter 34 . 9/29/2013
So are you continuing the second part onbthis same story or are you going to put out a new story? I love this so much! You are awesome!
| valen chapter 31 . 9/27/2013
I love it try to keep it going to 100 chapters at least... my buddy made a hinalee on another site that's 347 chapters as of right now