|Reviews for The Space Between the Lines|
| Julie SBXMomX chapter 2 . 11/14/2013
Just read both of these stories. The Hannah story I think described Hannah's though to a tee. Your descriptive detail is so flowing and displays the characters thoughts and emotions so well. I think Hannah really felt she had more time before it got to serious. Really she should have as 3 months was really a short courtship period for a new couple. Makes me wonder if subconsciously Booth was pushing to make his Hannah relationship work so if it did not he did not lose out again with a chance with Brennan after her no regrets disclosure. Anyway, I am personally grateful Hannah said no. It really irks me the producers took this side relationship to the point of proposal to begin with. But in the end it all works out.
The Angela POV of her first day back and watching B&B was wonderful. I love Ang and Bren relationship. Her "rookie mistake" comment was great. I really hate the fans missed out so much on those early days of fun, passion and discovery. I think that is part of why the fandom was disappointed in the honeymoon episode because we have never got to see the B&B passion. Thank goodness for our fanfic writers. If you have time, I would love to see you expand this revel story line in your own special story telling way to see the lab and FBI co-workers learn of the relationship news. Cam, Caroline, Sweets, Cullen, Charlie, Hacker, and interns. As a fan missing those reactions is really sad. I am hoping for the 200 episode the show would do a look back to the B&B initial hookup phase to repay the fans on what we missed out on. I can only dream.
Loved the stories. Thx
| Yatobu chapter 2 . 2/8/2013
Thank God I follow you because I usually only want to read stories that tag Booth and Brennan. Aww Maria, I love this chapter. I keep picturing their happy faces while reading it. It's a shame we didn't get enough scenes in their earlier romantic relationship stage on the show but I'm happy where they are now so I don't complain anymore. Thanks for sharing it.
| SchwuppDiDupsi chapter 2 . 2/7/2013
hehe, really liked that chapter
| FaithinBones chapter 2 . 2/7/2013
Aww very nice. Made me smile during the whole chapter. I think I needed this since Monday will be here shortly. Nuf said.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
Hannah's thoughts are a interesting, scary place. Her cruelty to both Booth and Brennan is astounding. I also can't figure out if she is aware of how cruel is she is or not and I also can't decide what is worse if she realized she is being selfish and cruel and is in search of the shallow goals of fun and did it anyway or if she believes her own hype that she does not see that she is selfish and cruel and realize how shallow her goals for Booth and her are and that she is actually selfishly hurting both Booth and Brennan.
Hope you update soon and would love see Hannah's thoughts after the proposal and Booth's reactions to her statements.
| Phosphorescent chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
A nice glimpse into Hannah's head. Thanks for sharing!
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
Hannah certainly sounds selfish and her thoughts on Booth's feelings and Brennan's well are minimal. She also seemed to know that she needed to show minimal interest in his family or friends to be able to stick around for as long as she wanted with Booth. Her thoughts on Brennan seemed amazingly cruel and her reasons why she did not just step up and return the sunglasses were more about making herself look good instead of Brennan. Her thoughts on Booth and what he might want or need was also thoughtlessly cruel. Loved that Hannah got all these warning signs from Brennan to Booth but she still went merrily on her way in her need for fun. Wish to see another one shot after Booth dumps her after she turns down his proposal (great she said no)in such a self centered to hear her thoughts on that one. Kind of would also want a one shot with Hannah after Booth dumps her, and have meet either Sweets, Cam or Hodgins and they tell her what's what and she should never contact either Booth or Brennan and that they are warning her for her safety then for B&B.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
Very good, for a Hannah story. It's an interesting approach and i like the way you write. waiting for more chapters
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
Now her thoughts after her rejection of proposal and his dumping her.
| Jenny1701 chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
Hi - You really captured what I think Hannah was like - and I don't think Booth never really let her in did he - her line in the episode about "she thought they would have more time" always made me think she did expect him to get serious at some point which would be when she would take her cue to leave but she hadn't expected it to be so soon - who knows. I for one have wished to see (like everyone else) when everyone found out Brennan and Booth were together as a couple and when they all discovered she was pregnant - not just their friends and colleagues at the Jeffersonian and when they let his bosses Cullen and Hacker know (and I know these scenarios have been done several times in fanfiction but believe me they could have been done better, especially by someone who can write so descriptively and weave a story with such atmosphere, as well as yourself - pretty please?). I would also like to see Booths colleagues finding out in some way especially as there has been obvious interest in their relationship from other agents. I look forward to your next post - this one was a pleasure to read.
| daisesndaffidols chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
This is one of the more likeable Hannah stories..even though I far from like her.. nice to see it from her POV. I never got how she missed the signs that Booth wanted more from her..but I'm glad she didn't say yes..Thanks for the story
| geraghtyvl chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
I really liked this story... Unlike other seasons of Bones, I have not gone back to watch Season 6, except maybe The Doctor in The Photo and Hannah-less ones.. So it was interesting to read a story with Hannah's point of view. I have to say, I always thought it was amazing that Hannah, being the world class journalist, didn't catch on about Booth's feelings about relationships. But we have to assume that Booth never really opened up to Hannah about much...except that Brennan "didn't want to have regrets". I know, let it go! As Faithinbones knows, I'm having trouble with that! LOL. Anyway, would love another chapter with Hannah's thoughts when Booth throws her to the curb!
| SchwuppDiDupsi chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
sounds interesting. looking forward to more.
| penandra chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
What a delight that in gifting Lenora, others of us in the fandom also benefit!
Great fic. Of course I can appreciate it 'cause we know the rest of the story! :-D
Although I didn't care for the arc when first televised, I still watched. But now I find myself passing on reruns from early S.6 - even when Hannah isn't present (except for Dr. in the Photo) .
So I appreciate this fic. Gives some insight into her thought process - and even some reason for the whole silly sunglasses scene - what could HH&Co have been thinking?!
Thanks again for sharing the gift for Lenora with all of us! An early holiday gift!
| FaithinBones chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
"Seeley Booth, macho army guy, strong and confident, who could have anyone and anything he wanted, being needy. As if."
Wow, talk about clueless. Even after she'd been warned; she still didn't get it.
Great job. Thanks for the story, I loved it. I really haven't read very many Hannah sided stories so I found it very interesting to see her point of view.
I find it bizzare that she's such a good reporter and yet couldn't pick up the signs that Booth was a very serious guy about relationships.
I hope you have a great Thanksgiving and Happy Bones Day.