Reviews for Off The Rails - One Shot
sophdrea chapter 1 . 12/24/2012
OMG, Discordia and Karen! I had totally forgotten about the day Bethy posted that manip of the EMT's and you two talked about writing a story to go with the picture. This is that story, right? It is Christmas Eve and I am still sick. I asked some of our friends to rec the hottest fic they could think of, to help me forget how bad I felt. Ms. Viv sent me the link to this one.
I feel like a new woman! Don't feel my fever, my stuffy nose, or my aching bones. You girls cured me!
This thing was HOT, HOT, HOT! The fact that you came up with a hetero couple, a gay couple and a stalled train and turned it into SEX CENTRAL just blows my mind. You both deserve 100 gold stars, all the free booze you can drink, and 365 days of mind-blowing loving!
Now to the bad part... I totally intend to hound you both until you continue this. The possibilities between these four are endless, endless I tell you! I know you have other stories you are working on, but one day those will be finished. That is when I will remind you of this amazing little story that almost melted my laptop; and I will beg you for more.
Thanks for the fun girls. It was EPIC!
garddita17 chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
Wow, that was so hot! Loved it. New doors opening up for these four. ;)
the two at the end...Emmett and Carlisle? Or maybe Dimetri.
lovingyou4ever chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
Carlisle and Emmett... loved this one and the one with Jasper an Edward in the pain clinic...
Cared chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
Thumbs up is right LOL.
Withmyheadintheclouds chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
This was a great little story. I loved it. If I had to guess who the last two men were would be Emmett and Carlisle.
padme35 chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
WOW! I'm gonna guess the 2 guys at the end were Emmett and Jacob.
callmepagliacci chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
Best of luck in the contest!
shellshock81 chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
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TiramiSue84 chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
Unf. That was so HOT! Jfc...

Awesome job the two of you did there. And if that's the result - I really need to you ladies working together soon! ;D

Oh my guess on who watched the little show on the train: from description - and knowing karenec love for Daddy C (at least in combination with Edward) - the blond guy definitely was Carlisle. Burly, dark-haired and with dimples, the other guys has to be Emmett. ;D

Loved it!

-Sue
mugglemom08 chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
So. Fucking. HOT! *thud*
Court0624 chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
Great chapter!'
ulyses birdwing chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
Hot!
RandomFan11 chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
Holy moly that was HOT! Geeeeeee! You should totally write more stories like that!
p3t3r33d chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
This was really super hot! I prefer slash but the whole thing was sexy;) I adore Riley/Edward and I wish there was more fics about them.. As for the peeping Toms, I'm going to guess they were James and Emmett? They seem the most likely to me lol
CoppertopJ chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
Loved it. Guessing one was Emmett, not sure about the other. Extremely hot!
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