Excellent chapter,

I like this chapter a little less but Atem's dream/memory balance it ! I like his and Mana's interaction in his bedroom. Good cliffhanger, though !

Can't wait to see next chapter !

wow awesome and i take back my earlier comment i felt Atems personality in a much deeper level this time

though i still wonder how the gang will react when they figure out atem's pass, i mean former Pharaoh and all. the teasing and awe will be endless. plus his relationship with mana. i must say you boarder the rating in this chapter to T very descriptive though i am not complaining. i enjoy a good fluff and smut and you hit it just right without going over the top.

cant wait till your next update and the hiatus thing it would be disappointing and all but if you plan to write another vaseshipping story i believe i will survive. so i repeat awesome chap and cant wait to read more

CLIFFHANGER! AWESOME CHAPTER! please update soon!

I like how this chapter focuses more on Atem, it gives him more character.

I like the interaction between him and Mahad.

I love how you wrote ancient Atem's thoughts in this and the kiss in that was cute.

As for the poll, since I'm not sure if it works on a mobile device or not, I pick either the Snow Queen or Card Captor one.

This was great! I laughed a bunch. Great job! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

Awesome :D! I like how you portray Aknadin in this.

AWESOME CHAPTER! please update soon!

I found how you wrote the part where Pegasus did the spell cool.

The part with the duel monsters attacking was cool.

The mummy ripped his eye out! Damn that has to hurt!

I'm curious to see why Mana can hear the mummy while no one else can, besides Pegasus. Also, I'm wondering; is Pegasus still alive?

I loved how you added the, "Talk later, run now!" quote from the first yugioh movie.

I laughed at the line, "Well congratulations. You just raised the servant to an ancient demon that will destroy the world. Three thousand years of us guarding this sacred place and other secrets and now thanks to you, we are all now royally screwed." it sounds like something the nostalgia critic would say in one of his reviews.

I found the part with Ryou and Yugi stroking the two dragon monsters cute.

Also there were a couple typos in this:

"...Maahd was the first to exclaim..."

It should be Mahad.

"...we've seen Duel Monsters ome to life..."

It should be "come to life".

This story is sooooooooooooooooooo good
UPDATE ASAP

Wow, really good chapter. The pieces are starting to come together now. I really am enjoying this story and the dialog in some cases is hilarious and releases the tension of the moment.

I can't wait to see when the gang finds out about the past and Atem role as Pharaoh. Especially when it will come to controlling the monsters and the Egyptian Gods.

The only negative thing i have to say is that I feel that Atem's role in the story is really small. I wanna get to know him better. There is so much mystery with his character that is near killing me.

WOW! I want to know what comes next I'm getting excited here! Can't wait Update Fast!

this is my first time reading it starting at chapter 1 until the latest and I think it got me interested its the first story about my favorite couple AtemXMana story about both ancient Egypt and the future... I really like and hope you could update it sooner or finish the whole story I'm excited to see what would happen next... what would happen to my favorite couple and the story... Can't wait! Good Luck and I'm here for support!

So short! Can't wait for the raising! Update soon!

Great chapter! please update soon!