I love it ! Especially the bit between Atem and Mana !

Yes, I have heard of this SOPA by another author. It's really... I don't even have words... Well good luck from France for all those in America who can put a stop to this madness !

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The interaction between Mahad and Atem was good.

The part where Atem put on the ancient duel disk was cool. How come I gotta feeling that thing will come in later? lol

I found it cute and romantic when Atem put that necklace around her neck.

Yay! Atem and Mana kissed. The way you wrote that kissed was super cute.

I do find it cool how Seto had dreams about the Blue-Eyes since it does show his connection to Kisara.

I loved Mahad's comment, "You look like Siegfried Von Schroeder just took over your company."

I also I did change some things about that SOPA bit. Because I looked at an article on DA which talks about it in more detail on a more intellectual stand point; and it's more directed towards videos which have 'copy written' things in like lets plays, covers, amvs, reviews with movie clips in it, fan dubs, and things of that nature could be sent to prison with felony charges then things like fanfiction and fan art. However, I still find even that to be stupid on so many levels for many reasons on a both a logical and moral standpoint; and I still believe that if this bill passes, more like it which could effect fanfiction will come. Sorry about not telling you this, but I just figured out about this recently. Here's the revised version, also I am only putting up the paragraphs I changed and not the whole thing:

On a very serious note, a part of the SOPA bill, the stupid document that tried to take away our freedoms on the internet which the American government tried to pass a few years ago, is trying to be passed again. And this time around, if this bill gets passed, if a particular stream contains ANY copyrighted material in the broadest of terms the uploader and creator of the content could be found guilty and put in prison for years on felony charges. Also, anyone who streams a video with 'copyrighted' content, whether it be on YouTube, a walkthrough for a video game, or a kid singing a song could be faced with charges as well. Yeah, you heard me right - anyone who posts lets plays, amvs, fandubs, lyric videos, singing a lyric song in public, reviews which have movie clips in it, fan made movies or covers online could possibly be cell mates with serial killers and rapists. That is one of the highest form of criminal offensives for something as simple as uploading a video game walkthrough on YouTube, playing a song with lyrics of your favorite artist, posting a review with movie clips in it, or making a fan made movie or amv.

This doesn't just effects people in the States, but world wide. If this bill gets passed, many people who post videos with 'copy written' material, especially in the States, online could possibly end up with major charges, possibly being put in maximum security prison long side serial killers and rapists. These could possibly include your friends and family to people at thatguywiththeglasses to your favourite YouTuber.

it is confirmed: Mana and Atem were a couple, at least in a past life. and that is totally like the priests to separate them despite the fact that not doing so might have resulted in one seriously P.O'ed ghost (Atem) haunting them for that stunt until they died. and Mana opening the coffin like it was nothing... well, I guess she can be forgiven that stunt seeing as said coffin's occupant was helping her to open it!

ah, it was cute and funny from the beginning
please dont take so long to update
there is so much suspense and mystery

Ah, losing inspiration and writer's block. I can relate. Maybe if you take a break from this story you will get more inspiration later? Anyways, good chapter.

I love this chapter ! The passagewith Bakura you directly pick from the Mummy:

Bakura's face was absolutely priceless.

"Oh my gods. Can you see all of…?"

Atem nodded.

"Yeah."

"Can you believe….?"

"Yeah."

"Can I just…?"

Atem shook his head definitively.

"NO."

And there is something about the moment Mana enters Atem's sarcophagus chamber that i Love! It's... touching, i guess, in a way... and the message from Mana's past life apprentice, too.

Ah, so it was the diadianks they wanted!

Can't wait to see next chapter ! Eve if it is in a long time!

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Wonderful chapter! please update soon!

Wow a lot happened!

I find this story great.

I found the interaction between Marik and Bakura was amusing near the beginning.

I found it super funny how Bakura kept on trying to take item's from "Atem's" tomb even though he kept on getting called out for it. Still, it seems like something he would do and I am not surprised that he tried to do that at all.

I laughed at the part where Mana said her father learnt that quote from a movie.

Huh, I guess I have something in common with Mana's parents since I am very much a TV series and movie buff.

I find it cool how Atem and Yugi both like the Indiana Jones movie since that's one of my favourite movies too.

Okay; the part where Atem what Mahad had in common with Indiana Jones and Mahad's reaction to Mana's answer was really funny and made me laugh.

Good chapter.

Yes! An update ! Love this chapter ! Especially the passage between Mahad and Mana, when she tell her brother that Atem has her drawings. The suggestion of a deeper relationship between the Pharaoh and Magician's apprentice (which here, is true) and Mahad's urge to have a... "talk" with Atem is funny!

And I love this phrase of Bakura: "Think of it this way little brother, we'll certainly have a very interesting story to tell everyone about what we did this summer."

That, would be funny ! Good job again!

Poor Mahad; I know what that feels like since I still remember the same thing happening to me during final as a result of shoving so much information in my head at once that it can give me a headache sometimes. But I did get okay marks on those tests and went to bed on time, so I guess some good came out of it.

Also, I don't blame Mahad being stressed out considering he had his world view crushed (since I assume like in Fate or Something Like It he doesn't believe in the supernatural) and had to deal with one bizarre, life-threating event after the other. I feel sorry for him as well.

The interaction between Mahad and Mana was great. I am glad that they made up about what happened. I enjoyed how Mana was quoted her dad to mess with Mahad a lot.

Wow; Mahad is going to have the "Threaten the Idiot that thinks He's in love with my Sister" talk, still a part of me still wants to see how that conversation would go down. lol

I enjoyed the line, "We tell him what we always do, I got into an unfortunate adventure I couldn't resist and I dragged you along with me." that seems like something Bakura would say so damn much.

Atem's reaction to Kaiba calling his brother "squirt" was amusing.