|Reviews for Black Widow|
| me chapter 4 . 10/4/2013
cool, sounds like this story could go somewhere :)
| Debbie A chapter 4 . 9/14/2013
Glad you decided to come back to this story, really enjoying it and look forward to reading more
| Sam Waterston Fan chapter 4 . 9/14/2013
I hope you update soon. :)
| Sam Waterston Fan chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
Good chapter. You are so mean if you get Adam hurt. Meanie. :)
| Forfargirl21 chapter 4 . 9/14/2013
Good update...Like how Mac's Protective side has come out
| smuffly chapter 4 . 9/14/2013
Yippee, you updated! This chapter was very creepy. Adam's calmness made it even more unnerving - he has no idea that he's in danger! The pace here was great and the fact that Adam was reluctantly trying to jog made me smile, as did Flack's reaction.
| 1917farmgirl chapter 4 . 9/13/2013
Adam, listen to Mac! Be worried! So very worried!
And the poor man she just killed - he was just trying to be nice. :(
A cage in her basement - this is SO not good.
| 1917farmgirl chapter 3 . 9/13/2013
Okay, that is just sick and twisted and oh so very creepy! She's been in his house? In his bed? *shudders*
And I'm starting to realize I think I missed something. You said this took place after something, and I assumed it was an episode. But I'm guessing now it's another story you wrote? Will have to go find it and maybe it will answer some questions like - ADAM WAS STABBED? Wow! And he has a girlfriend named Amber? Or at least had one (how could someone do that to Adam!) Is this why he's going to the shrink? Because of the other attack?
So many questions. Will have to keep reading.
Thanks for posting.
| 1917farmgirl chapter 2 . 9/13/2013
Oh no! She's seen him. Adam you should run!
This is building up to be a very tense story, I can tell.
And that part at the beginning, broke my heart. Poor Adam, tied up in a cell in the dark, so humiliated at being fed, and so scared.
Come on team, you have to find him!
| 1917farmgirl chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
Oh, this is quite the creepy beginning! And after reading that beginning paragraph, I'm oh so very worried for Adam! Don't kill my lab rat!
Also curious what's going on with Sheldon's mother, and how this woman is killing the men without leaving any
Very good start.
| Forfargirl21 chapter 3 . 9/8/2013
Good Update...Hope you come back to this story in the futurn
| smuffly chapter 3 . 12/10/2012
Oh, poor Adam!
I love the contrast between Gail and her Voice. Clearly, the Voice has taken control, as Gail likes the strength that it gives her, and so she flushes her meds. I also love the way you keep pointing out little details like hair colour - subtle clues. Gail's planning is sinister, and the idea that she has been in Adam's bed without him knowing is very disturbing.
Great chapter. Keep it up!
| smuffly chapter 2 . 11/22/2012
A female serial killer makes a great change, and Violet is such a creepy one. The section where she feeds him makes me shudder! Nice Flack humour in this chapter, and great description of the moment when she begins to home in on Adam. Poor fellow!
| smuffly chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
Hooray! You've posted it! Good luck. I think that this is a great start, and Violet comes across as a really creepy and dangerous woman.