|Reviews for Pineapple Upside Down Cake, Narcissistic Detectives, and Fake Psychics|
| Anvelite chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
Yes you should write another chapter! I don't know about that last questions...I now have the urge to go see what that tastes like!
| SayaRules chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
I loved the story, but you need to start a new paragraph every time someone new speaks. Just saying.
| Ava-Potter gal chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
Yes, update. Just so you know, you're supposed to start a new paragraph when there's dialogue, and each time a different person speaks. Just a tip!
| torchil chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
I would like a new chapter. :)
| fantomfaire chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
This has promise...can't wait to read more! Please update again soon!
| JesusCaesar chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
Yes there should be another chapter, because there is a lot of things this story could turn into. :P I guess bananas and peanut butter are okay, I don't really like bananas so I am pretty much biased from the start.