Reviews for She that is not jealous is not in love
Build Up to the Fall chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
Okay, now that was perfection in written form. Totally fantastic! I love your idea and I can't wait for more from you, and as soon as possible! Especially brilliant as it was written in a foreign language!
inothernews chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
This is fantastic! I love jealous Mac! I hope you keep writing :D
iworkwithpens chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
I can't imagine trying to write fic in a foreign language, so bravo to you! And I too fear what this new character might mean for Will and Mac next season. Here's to hoping it's something like what you've written!

Excellent Will/Mac fluff and happiness!
Katycat1970 chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
Hey - great to see some writing from you... :)

Great job - I really enjoyed this...
Loved how he came to see her on the terrace and managed to blurt out 'I Love You'
Loved this line too... "Listen, there's only one person in the world I'd like to be with and that is you." - *sigh*

Thanks for posting - funnily enough - I've been worried that this character would be bought in as a love interest for Will... hmmmmm - I hope not!

Look forward to more from you when you can...
x
Jacks in my head chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
Cute story; great job!
lilacmermaid33 chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
Nice to see you write something! I think this is great - your writing is better than you give yourself credit for. I like the story, and there is some really great imagery in here ... although it sounds a little odd, I really like the line about the jellyfish.

I hope you keep writing!
SerialStoryLover chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
Ahhh nice bookend there with old Augustine! Very nice :)

Well, hello there! Lovely to see a fic from you - you kept that one quiet! :p Absolutely adored the bit about jellyfish - nice touch there, pal. I love the whole premise as well - when I heard about DeWitt I was a little worried that she might be a love rival...I guess only time will tell. Poor Mac! :(

Anyways, hope to hear more from you soon. Now that you've started I think the general trend is that you won't stop :) I hope so, anyway! Great job Millie! Love a happy ending :D
teanc09 chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
Good job! Thanks for posting!
millie.zhang chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
shit...can anyone tell one how to separate the paragraphs...

i did but how come it came out like this...no no no...