Reviews for Crumbling Sanity
xxBurningxx chapter 1 . 12/24/2012
Awesome! That was indeed a lovely novelization of that scene! I think you portrayed and captured Ayumi's thoughts perfectly! :D
accentcore8 chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
I wrote something like this a while ago. This is really good, and I think that the way you wrote everything out was amazing. I didn't see a lot of errors either. This was much better than mine, and I think that I'd like to see more from you. Good job.