Reviews for Sorry's Not Good Enough
Ray chapter 1 . 10/13/2015
This looks so great! Can't wait to read the rest!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/5/2015
My expression after finishing this chapter:
:D - D: - :D - :D Repeat.
The Patchwork Rabbit chapter 1 . 2/11/2015
I LOVE it!
NeverTooMuchInspiration chapter 13 . 1/12/2015
I'm surprised there wasn't a reveal in here somewhere. It seems almost inevitable as it is hard to build a friendship with the poison of lies coming in between. It is harder to rebuild it after its destruction with the lies still remaining, even if it is stronger one for having been broken previously. It seems to recovery will span long beyond this, but perhaps with Morgana gone it will not be as difficult. Thank you for posting this!
nina6612 chapter 4 . 8/9/2014
Hi your writting is super duper awsome! I am here crying and your writting is amazing!
christinemarie13 chapter 13 . 6/16/2014
You just aren't happy unless I'm heartbroken and completely depressed are you? At least you didn't kill off Merlin as I feared. I just don't know if I have the constitution for your writing. My emotions may never recover from this onslaught.
kasey chapter 13 . 5/31/2014
LOVE IT! Loved merlin's anger. Wanted to read one like this for AGES. It was GREAT! Loved how he didn't forgive straight away, that they had to show they actually meant instead of just a talk. :D Loved ur writing 2 :)
crazzyredhead chapter 13 . 2/6/2014
this is really good though I with you would have wrote more.. Loved the story though
xBookEaterx chapter 1 . 12/4/2013
hahaha I know, I was like "YEAH, COLIN!" He's the best actor ever :p
wryter501 chapter 13 . 12/4/2013
i think you brought the story back to the series plot-lines very nicely... i kind of wish it HAD gone this way... morgana gone, mordred loyal... sigh.
wryter501 chapter 6 . 12/4/2013
how ironic, that mordred stands up for merlin here... nice touch. always blamed kilgarrah for that... if merlin hadn't been so suspicious of mordred all along, he might have been good friends with him, enough to keep him from reacting badly to kara's death and joining morgana... the dragon didn't do merlin any favors, telling him the predicted future...
wryter501 chapter 5 . 12/4/2013
i think you've got a good balance of what must be going through merlin's mind, mixed in with the unnatural darkness of the poison - the push and pull of percival getting through to merlin, then gwaine unwittingly putting more distance there by assuming too much...
wryter501 chapter 4 . 12/4/2013
one small point - during the scene when gwen blames merlin for poisoning arthur, while the round table knights are present in the bed-chamber, it is random nameless knights who throw merlin in the cell. i remember thinking that if it had been one of merlin's friends, they'd have treated him differently, even if they had to obey gwen's orders to lock him up...
and i love seeing gwaine's point of view - the doubts, the desire to help that never came about... and merlin, being mad and gwaine and not wanting to talk to him, but not hesitating to get in the fight when it was going against gwaine... you've got an excellent and natural mix of emotions here...
wryter501 chapter 3 . 12/4/2013
oh, i think it's typically merlin for him to blame himself that he doesn't have friends who trust him... i like merlin at the end of his emotional rope, but still dedicated to arthur's destiny, safety, still willing to bring gwen back for his friend... it's also typically merlin for him to avoid a conversation being afraid of what he might say... i think you've got the characters all down very well, and this is a believable direction the episode/show might have gone - very interesting, and well done.
wryter501 chapter 2 . 12/4/2013
i like arthur in the first scene - angry and hurt, but also able to see merlin's side... this is also a prelude to the hollow queen, the episode where morgana attacks merlin directly, luring him into the forest to poison him... i like your addition of merlin's threat to gwen going into that...
there were times, in seasons 5 and a little in 4, that we saw that side of merlin... when he killed agravaine, when he faced the bandits after the poisoning... wish we could have seen more of bamf merlin...
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