|Reviews for The ugly duckling|
| Arina-Peachy chapter 2 . 11/26/2012
I'm actually in love with this like legit. Please just write 10 chapters in the next hour and post them, but that's not possible so one? I dont care just please update
| Lou chapter 2 . 11/23/2012
I love it
| blah chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
| 2 lazy 2 log in chapter 2 . 11/20/2012
| fanatic chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
I like Willow (my names is Willow), I like how no one is demonized. I like it so far and I like how she isn't outstandingly pretty or really clever and powerful. She does seem to be overly woeful of her situation but young teens seem to be selfish.
| james p is mine chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
awesome, will she be with james? i hope so.
| hello chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
some errors, I recommend a beta but overall I enjoy the story so far. Good job just fix some errors