Reviews for How I Wish The TV Show Went
SueStorrm chapter 7 . 5/28
You have no idea how much I love this fic.
I quite liked this chapter, in fact I think this was the best so far.
The scene at the cemetery was amazing, I love the way you write Helena and how you are dealing with her family conflicts. I also really liked the scene where Barbara is visiting Sarah's grave, it's cool you have added her to the canon of the series, as, I believe, she has never appeared in any film or series and I always liked her and her relationship with Jim.
But in my opinion the high point of this story is definitely the mentor relationship between Dinah and Helena. While the original series had bad versions of Canary (the teen version) and Huntress, in your fic you get hit completely these two.
You write so well these girls that if I had any decision-making power in the DC comics I would put you in the place of Bredan Fletcher (which does not make the slightest idea of how to write Dinah and Barbara properly).
I hope you can understand:)
Tinical chapter 6 . 7/31/2014
keep going your fic is amazing
Doesn't Matter42 chapter 5 . 5/3/2014
Livie works.
SueStorrm chapter 6 . 3/30/2014
Eu não deveria escrever essa review em português, mas escrever em inglês não é meu forte e mesmo sabendo que você não vai entender vou escrever de qualquer jeito para que você saiba que estou lendo. Gostei muito do fato de você mesclar outras séries e até animações com a sua fic , eu também achei interessante que você tenha incluído o comissário, já que na série ele infelizmente não apareceu. O fato de você ter revelado que a Dinah não pode ter filhos me fez desejar muito que no final ela adote alguma criança (a Sin quem sabe), aliás as participações de outras personagens do universo DC só deixa a história mais forte. Eu gostaria de dizer que eu amo muito a máscara da Caçadora e espero que em algum momento a Helena comece a usá-la. Até o próximo capítulo.
supernena25 chapter 6 . 3/19/2014
Thanks for the chapter, it's been a while. It's quite good actually, I really liked the fact that Helena is in costume now and I'm sad for Dinah and the fact she can't have kids ( I liked seeing Oliver for a moment and is really obvious that Dinah wants nothing to do with him. I'll be waiting for the chapter, hope the Commissioner gets out of this fine D
SueStorrm chapter 4 . 2/28/2014
Please do not abandon the story, I'm really enjoying your view of how the television series should have been. Além do mais é difícil encontrar fanfics das Aves que sejam tão boas. Eu realmente gosto da maneira que você escreve as personagens, em especial a Canário Negro.
SueStorrm chapter 2 . 1/30/2014
Relendo tudo, porque essa fic é muito boa, provavelmente a melhor de Aves de Rapina :)
potterfanforever chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
i just now started reading this story, its a good beginning, i will agree with some of points I did not like the portrayal of huntress in this show ether, nothing against Ashley Scott i like her in other movies and T.V. appearances, her character was awkward is not really the reason i just never cared for this version of Huntress being Batmans daughter, i like the Helena Bertinelli back story best.

I am not even going to go in to Rachel Skarsten part.

I will admit during the chase my mind had a image of spider-man or one of his cones jumped in to save the day lol. i just got done reading a few unfinished stories of Spider-man or one of his comes coming to the dc world and helping out in Gotham so its not surprise i got that thought lol. I t is to bad none of them have been updated in a long time.
SueStorrm chapter 5 . 12/29/2013
Esperando ansiosamente pela atualização.
SueStorrm chapter 3 . 12/29/2013
Eu realmente estou amando como as coisas estão acontecendo, ter a Dinah como uma heroína já experiente e a Helena como aprendiz casa perfeitamente com a história (por quê os produtores da série não pensaram da mesma forma?)
SueStorrm chapter 1 . 12/21/2013
Eu também adorava a série, mas depois de começar a ler os quadrinhos vi como era diferente, ainda assim tenho essa série como uma das minhas favoritas apesar dos erros. Falando agora da sua fanfic, eu realmente gostei muito e acho que se a série tivesse seguido esse rumo teria sido bem melhor, gostei de quase tudo que eu li, só fiquei meio chateada que você não quis usar a Hel B na história, mas tudo bem já que você está fazendo uma outra versão da série de tv. Espero que os próximos capítulos sejam tão bons quanto esse.
ghg chapter 5 . 11/29/2013
good story was that chloe from smallville
Barbarossa Rotbart chapter 5 . 11/10/2013
This story looks like a mixture of "Birds of Prey", "DC Animated Universe" and "Smallville".
supernena25 chapter 5 . 11/5/2013
Thank you for a new chapter, I'm glad you didn't abandoned this. So apparently Dinah doesn't get along with Oliver and we have Chloe in this, I wonder why they aren't together. It seems all three of them have issues with their families. I can't believe that Harleen and the Joker had a kid! And she's meta, this could get ugly really fast. I like Livie and I would love to help with names but I suck at it.
Again thank you for a new chapter and I can't wait for more chapters D
ben10987654321 chapter 5 . 11/5/2013
Yeah...mothers. Where would we be without them?

Helena needs to come to some sort of understanding about hers.

Hey, the royal flush gang...man i bet the heroes haven't missed them.

Harley and Ace...ok my mind is going to bad places. That's messed up.

Good to see you update this story again.
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