|Reviews for The Shadow in Exile|
| PoisonLiquid chapter 10 . 9/20/2013
This is the first chapter which have romance in it, and a fine one of course :D Love it man. Plz keep up your good work
| darkened senses chapter 10 . 9/20/2013
Woo! Romance! Good job, man. Loved the chapter and how you write :D Keep it up
| Russian Hunter chapter 10 . 9/20/2013
Another great chapter man.
I like how your putting some semi-Romance in there :D
Some grammar errors, but they definitely don't detract from the story. Keep it up!
| Russian Hunter chapter 9 . 8/14/2013
Talon and Riven for sure
| Alexzander95 chapter 5 . 8/3/2013
For pairings, atleast for Riven, I agree that TalonXRiven is good or if Riven is a lesbian in this story I fine that KatarinaXRiven is a good pairing.
| Talon - The Blade's Shadow chapter 9 . 7/27/2013
Love the story and truthfully I was fine with the OOC, they were kids anyway. As for romance, I personally like TalonxQuinn, however my secondary choice would be TalonxRiven, TalonxKatarina is okay, but Katarina is practically Talon's sister. So I vote for TalonxRiven.
| PoisonLiquid chapter 8 . 6/6/2013
Next chapter, PLZ!
| Natsu Xalamander chapter 1 . 6/3/2013
I love this couple
but most of all I love your story so keep up the good work
| Apocalyptian Scribe chapter 8 . 4/16/2013
I like this
continue this story and I will read
| TomZ1 chapter 7 . 3/31/2013
Good Story I really liked it I kind of like the couple so keep the good work ill be waiting for the next chap
| B.M.B.T chapter 7 . 3/29/2013
I dont know what it is about this story, but god damnit i love it xD great story you got here, and i certainly hope to read more.
Keep up the good work :D
| darkened senses chapter 7 . 3/18/2013
First off, wonderful story! I've been waiting for another chapter for awhile now and it's finally here. Your spelling is a little of, but it's not unreadable. Can't wait to see how the league match will unfold and if Talon will win or not! XD As for pairings, (not sure if you figured out who will be together, but I thought I'd put in my thoughts anyway) would be Talon and Riven if you're ever going to make a relationship. I just feel that if you put Talon with someone else then Riven will be on her own and it will feel as if we are reading two separate stories in one. You don't have to listen to me, but it's just what I think. Again, wonderful story and I'm looking forward to another chapter!
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/17/2013
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
Aww :'D Sooo sweet. I like how you portrayed the deadly, ruthless champions as sweet little children. I can't stop smiling :')
| lugeba chapter 7 . 3/17/2013
good story :), i prefer a talon x lux pair .