Reviews for Night of the Fatal Frenchman
JonIsKingInTheNorth chapter 15 . 2/19/2013
Ouch! Poor Jeremy! Sounds like he had a rough day.
The Wild Wild Whovian chapter 15 . 2/15/2013
Stream-of-consciousness review:

Oh, he's gonna monologue!

George is mixing drinks? I ain't drinkin' anything mixed by George!

That's telling him, Thorton!

Ah, Artie - just can't keep his smart mouth shut! (Yay!)

"Didn't anyone ever tell you to kill first and talk later?" Loveless smiled. - since when does Loveless ever take that advice?

And Loveless gets away, as usual!

I had fun reading this story.
JonIsKingInTheNorth chapter 14 . 2/6/2013
They need a Lojack for the train in case it gets stolen next time.
The Wild Wild Whovian chapter 14 . 2/5/2013
The mirrored hall sounds like something out of the palace at Versailles - which fits, since Antoine is French.

As for Antoine himself, I like him not at all. And I even feel sorry for Loveless.

I'm glad David developed a conscience, but now I wonder who the other person was - and whether I missed something (or forgot it).

Looking forward to more!
The Wild Wild Whovian chapter 13 . 2/2/2013
Wow, I'm actually feeling sorry for Dr Loveless!
Deana chapter 12 . 1/18/2013
LOL Jim and Artie stole their own train!
The Wild Wild Whovian chapter 12 . 1/18/2013
Loveless stole the train - again! :-O

I wonder what Richmond is thinking of at the end there!

Looking forward to the next installment. :-)
Diddlepie chapter 11 . 1/7/2013
"James my boy, if I live to be a hundred I will never try that again."
You have some wonderful humor in your story. I love Loveless and Artie together.
The Wild Wild Whovian chapter 11 . 1/5/2013
Jim was being a stinker.
Neshomeleh chapter 11 . 1/5/2013
Glad the two are back together:)
JonIsKingInTheNorth chapter 11 . 1/5/2013
Artie's getting screechy again.
Diddlepie chapter 8 . 1/4/2013
It's getting very interesting here! What a pair- loveless and - Gordon . Of course I use them myself.
Diddlepie chapter 6 . 1/4/2013
? They couldn't find their way out of a dark room with a lantern in their hand."
Great line!
Diddlepie chapter 5 . 1/4/2013
Well you do have me very curious about what good doctor Thornton has been up to.
And we 've got some nasty nasty bad guys here. Ouch!
Diddlepie chapter 3 . 1/3/2013
Your story is coming along nicely. I like having Grant in there. What a fun addition he I' m curious where you are going with this. thanks for writing
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