Reviews for What If?
Laura Daughter of Aphrodite chapter 2 . 10/7/2013
Will this story have sex? CUZ THAT WOULD BE GREAT!
M.M. Neal chapter 4 . 4/21/2013
I like it:)
M.M. Neal chapter 3 . 4/9/2013
You have some minor capitalization errors, but other than that its very well written. The wording is pretty good.
xMysteryWriterx chapter 3 . 4/9/2013
when will u be doing more cos i loved it!
dIVINErEDEMPTION chapter 3 . 4/9/2013
great story plz update soon
babycheeks31 chapter 3 . 4/9/2013
Interesting...I think it needs more time on it though :)
Ella chapter 2 . 2/5/2013
Wright quick your starting on a great book
M.M. Neal chapter 2 . 11/26/2012
Hey this was good! Carly's a straight up *bleep* though, not that I like her much anyways. Sam's better! Anyways continue my gifted friend.
dIVINErEDEMPTION chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
good so far update soon
Guest chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
Oh emund

Yu hertny extronigns nigeria.

Edwart 8D
M.M. Neal chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
Dude it had a few errors here and there nothin major. But I thought it was really good!:) please continue!

Shadowgrl97