|Reviews for Dangerous Crowds|
| ANONYMOUS REVEIW chapter 1 . 7/11
YOU COULD.. IDK.. FINISH IT! SO MAYBE PEOPLE LIKE ME AREN'T DYING! PUTZ! YOU DISGUST ME! SHIST! I'M OUTTA CONTROL. SRY. I LOVE THIS FANFIC. YOU'VE PROBABLY ABANDONED IT, BUT I STILL HAVE HOPE! ANYWHOOO... ILYSM! THIS IS A GREAT READ!
| Guest chapter 14 . 6/20
Where’s the rest?! I must read the rest!
Sigh... now that that is out. Looks like you haven’t updated this one since 2013. That makes me sad since you writing is excellent and I really see enjoy it and now I may never get to read the end of this story. This story reminds me of my love for the fantastic beast movie. I struggled with the HP movies cause, you know, they aren’t the books. But I just love getting engrossed in this world again without having to compete with my view and feeling of the book’s characters. I hope one day you revisit this story. One of the best fanfics I have read.
| xMessrRhiax chapter 14 . 6/18
I've really enjoyed and loved this story and the one before.
Your characterizations of James and Lily are particularly great and it is so fun to read!
I've read this 'series' at least 3 times now over the course of a couple of years and I never tire of it.
I would, of course, be thrilled if you continued this story however i understand it is difficult to continue something once you've been away from it for a while.
I just wanted to let you know how much I loved reading all right Evans and dangerous crowds!
| Guest chapter 14 . 5/25
Please please please come back and finish this story! I know it’s been 5 years but it’s never too late! All of characters are so well developed and yet still have so much great potential for storylines, and you’re such an amazing writer!
| MaraudersCheetahPrincess chapter 14 . 5/20
I read ARE and just finished reading this story... I loved both! I love your writing and your characters. I think you did a great job showing James and Lily’s love story. I am not sure if you will ever continue this trilogy you’ve created (I hope you do!) but I just wanted to say thank you for writing all that you have so far and sharing with us! Good luck!
| WeasleyPotterGranger chapter 14 . 4/12
i just wanted to let you know that i've read this story and alright evans, and they are some of the best jily fanfics i've ever read. i really hope you continue this story, but i completely understand if you don't. if you had any favourite jily fics because i need to find some more good stories.
i wish you all the best with your future endeavours and writing,
| tucke004 chapter 14 . 3/2
ADDDDDDDDD MOREEEEEEEE CHAPTERSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!
| ags chapter 7 . 2/11
I know this is abandoned and ur no longer active but honest to god this is the most beautiful paragraph of all fanfiction in this world: "And when he heard the muffled laughter from the bed next to his, the murmured words and the slow exhalations of breath, the unmistakable sounds of two people kissing and touching and soaking up how happy they made each other, Remus couldn't bring himself to lie in bed anymore. He couldn't deal with it and he hardly knew why, but he kicked off his covers, shrugged into a sweater, and slipped on his shoes. He left the room, shutting the door quietly behind him and leaving Lily and James to each other. He loved them both and he was happy for them, but that didn't mean he could fall asleep to the two of them together. It only made him feel lonely, and suddenly being alone felt very wrong.,"
| sambayar chapter 14 . 2/8
oh it's wonderful..:)but why stopped writing... I know it's too long but pls continue..
| Guest chapter 14 . 1/19
Super bonne fic. J'espère qu'un jour la fin sera disponible! Belle évolution des personnages et super relation james lily. Bravo !
| wishIwerePotter chapter 14 . 1/11
Ok, so listen. Here I am searching for a cute Marauder fanfic that has Marlene with Sirius (because I love them and consider it TOTAL canon and I don't particularly like it when authors make up characters because I love canon and that's just my rubbish). I stumble upon "All right, Evans?" and I was like this is GREAT! So here I am totally elated about this AWESOME fic I just found so I read it all too quickly. Then I'm on "Dangerous Crowds" and this is amazing as well. Now, I am in 2018, and at the end of this chapter. So, I think "ok, not a problem. Let me just look when the author last posted..." So i scroll to the top only to see that the last time posted was...oh...look at that... 2013! So now I am COMPLETELY freaking out (not only because I really want to read the things that you seem to have written and planned, but also, there was no McKinnon in this chapter and not to mention the bloody CLIFFHANGER!) and it is not ok for me or my well being. Please update soon! I love this and REALLY want you to finish it! Ok that is. PLEASE!
| aryanair12912 chapter 1 . 1/1
I just wish that someone would have taken time and talked to Regulus.
| Scarlett Ribb0n chapter 1 . 12/8/2017
sadly, I'm pretty sure she has abandoned this fic. ._. i tried massaging her on tumblr about it, and shd kinda ignored it. so yeah. it's probs just going to be unfinished. ._.
| Guest chapter 14 . 11/22/2017
Why is this abandoned?! This is so great! pls come back!
| Sally chapter 14 . 10/31/2017
Hello, I've just started reading Jily fics and started reading Alright Evans. And I didn't pay attention to the fact that this was not finished and here I am at chapter 14 sitting in shock because there is no more and it hasnt been updated since 13. Kinda freaking out on the inside. Anyway. I love this series! It's so good! There is so much to love, so many funny scenes. And I just love the way that James and Lily love each other! So pure! And I really love Remus in this sequel, he's just so lovely with his crush. Love love love it all! 3