|Reviews for Dangerous Crowds|
| MademoiselleLottchen chapter 14 . 8/27
noooo, I knew I shouldn't come here seeing as the fic is abandoned. is it save to say it is abandoned though after give years or do you think there is a slim chance of you continuing this story? I've left a review on ARE before and I don't think I have much to add here. it's still one of the greatest Jili fanfics I've ever read (and I read plenty) I miss the Prewett brother a lot, but everyone else kinda makes up for that lot, so I was really looking forward to Alice's wedding to seeing them again.
your writing in general is brilliant in general, and I love Dorcas. could she be any sweeter? I also really love that you made her a Slytherin. you really show that not all Slytherins are bad people, and not all bad people are Slytherins. I forgot who it was but someone talked about that didn't they? About Slytherin bad rep and how they're not all bad but those very loud ones overshadow the good ones. it was so meta and so good. very necessary point.
usually I'm not a fan of love triangles, but this one I can get on board with. it might just be what leads Peter away from his friends and more down the death eater path. surely that's not the only reason, but I'm sure it'll help him abandon his friends. He might feel abandoned or betrayed by Remus in the first place (which is really so stupid, if two people fancy the same person that person should just decide who they want to be with, rather than neither of them going for it or some other bullshit) And Remus really deserves to be happy (with Dorcas! cos they're cute)
oh one more thing I didn't mention in my previous comment, I like the Snape POV chapters. I mean I wasn't sure I would, because I hate Snape passionately, but they are very well written, totally bring across his obsession with Lily and how he just doesn't want her to be happy if she isn't happy with him, so he rather see her hurt than be with someone else, but also his frustration because he knows she was never laughing with Snape as she is with James, she was never that at ease with him or just simply put that happy. But his POV still doesn't feel forced or anything, and I reckon a Snape fan would find sympathy with him, I'm just to bitter to do so. And boy do I hate Rita. As an adult and as a child. she is truly just as horrible now than later.
So I still have hope you will finish this story, though I understand it's hard picking a story up after such a long time, but a girl can dream.
| estafalla chapter 5 . 7/28
This is a very stupid question. But, let’s face it, Fanfic is a pretty shame free zone. Is Marlene blonde or not in this fic?
| ANONYMOUS REVEIW chapter 1 . 7/11
YOU COULD.. IDK.. FINISH IT! SO MAYBE PEOPLE LIKE ME AREN'T DYING! PUTZ! YOU DISGUST ME! SHIST! I'M OUTTA CONTROL. SRY. I LOVE THIS FANFIC. YOU'VE PROBABLY ABANDONED IT, BUT I STILL HAVE HOPE! ANYWHOOO... ILYSM! THIS IS A GREAT READ!
| Guest chapter 14 . 6/20
Where’s the rest?! I must read the rest!
Sigh... now that that is out. Looks like you haven’t updated this one since 2013. That makes me sad since you writing is excellent and I really see enjoy it and now I may never get to read the end of this story. This story reminds me of my love for the fantastic beast movie. I struggled with the HP movies cause, you know, they aren’t the books. But I just love getting engrossed in this world again without having to compete with my view and feeling of the book’s characters. I hope one day you revisit this story. One of the best fanfics I have read.
| xMessrRhiax chapter 14 . 6/18
I've really enjoyed and loved this story and the one before.
Your characterizations of James and Lily are particularly great and it is so fun to read!
I've read this 'series' at least 3 times now over the course of a couple of years and I never tire of it.
I would, of course, be thrilled if you continued this story however i understand it is difficult to continue something once you've been away from it for a while.
I just wanted to let you know how much I loved reading all right Evans and dangerous crowds!
| Guest chapter 14 . 5/25
Please please please come back and finish this story! I know it’s been 5 years but it’s never too late! All of characters are so well developed and yet still have so much great potential for storylines, and you’re such an amazing writer!
| MaraudersCheetahPrincess chapter 14 . 5/20
I read ARE and just finished reading this story... I loved both! I love your writing and your characters. I think you did a great job showing James and Lily’s love story. I am not sure if you will ever continue this trilogy you’ve created (I hope you do!) but I just wanted to say thank you for writing all that you have so far and sharing with us! Good luck!
| WeasleyPotterGranger chapter 14 . 4/12
i just wanted to let you know that i've read this story and alright evans, and they are some of the best jily fanfics i've ever read. i really hope you continue this story, but i completely understand if you don't. if you had any favourite jily fics because i need to find some more good stories.
i wish you all the best with your future endeavours and writing,
| tucke004 chapter 14 . 3/2
ADDDDDDDDD MOREEEEEEEE CHAPTERSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!
| ags chapter 7 . 2/11
I know this is abandoned and ur no longer active but honest to god this is the most beautiful paragraph of all fanfiction in this world: "And when he heard the muffled laughter from the bed next to his, the murmured words and the slow exhalations of breath, the unmistakable sounds of two people kissing and touching and soaking up how happy they made each other, Remus couldn't bring himself to lie in bed anymore. He couldn't deal with it and he hardly knew why, but he kicked off his covers, shrugged into a sweater, and slipped on his shoes. He left the room, shutting the door quietly behind him and leaving Lily and James to each other. He loved them both and he was happy for them, but that didn't mean he could fall asleep to the two of them together. It only made him feel lonely, and suddenly being alone felt very wrong.,"
| sambayar chapter 14 . 2/8
oh it's wonderful..:)but why stopped writing... I know it's too long but pls continue..
| Guest chapter 14 . 1/19
Super bonne fic. J'espère qu'un jour la fin sera disponible! Belle évolution des personnages et super relation james lily. Bravo !
| wishIwerePotter chapter 14 . 1/11
Ok, so listen. Here I am searching for a cute Marauder fanfic that has Marlene with Sirius (because I love them and consider it TOTAL canon and I don't particularly like it when authors make up characters because I love canon and that's just my rubbish). I stumble upon "All right, Evans?" and I was like this is GREAT! So here I am totally elated about this AWESOME fic I just found so I read it all too quickly. Then I'm on "Dangerous Crowds" and this is amazing as well. Now, I am in 2018, and at the end of this chapter. So, I think "ok, not a problem. Let me just look when the author last posted..." So i scroll to the top only to see that the last time posted was...oh...look at that... 2013! So now I am COMPLETELY freaking out (not only because I really want to read the things that you seem to have written and planned, but also, there was no McKinnon in this chapter and not to mention the bloody CLIFFHANGER!) and it is not ok for me or my well being. Please update soon! I love this and REALLY want you to finish it! Ok that is. PLEASE!
| aryanair12912 chapter 1 . 1/1
I just wish that someone would have taken time and talked to Regulus.
| Scarlett Ribb0n chapter 1 . 12/8/2017
sadly, I'm pretty sure she has abandoned this fic. ._. i tried massaging her on tumblr about it, and shd kinda ignored it. so yeah. it's probs just going to be unfinished. ._.