Reviews for Shinobi's Creed |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Looking forward to Chapter 51. |
![]() ![]() ![]() did the assassins have internal energy or am I confusing something? how did they use special vision or animal control if they didn't have internal energy?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() you made a rather significant mistake in this chapter. Shisui had access to Susano. in canon he never used it because he was taken by surprise and lost an eye before he knew what Danzo was doing. in your story, you have had Shisui discover Danzo is a traitor. at that point he should have immediately defaulted to the ultimate defence of Susano. you clearly still wanted him to die like canon. so you should of had him lose an eye instantly, not get grabbed, monologed to, then attacked. |
![]() ![]() and very much ruined. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fun read so far! I don't know about others, but i like that hokage gave permission for his order, because you have actual precedents like clans, and history of accepting other unusual abilities to the villages. |
![]() ![]() It Is good to read another chapter again hope Life Is goig to be better, i hope that Tayuya will be captured by the leaf, have a nice day and stay safe, hope the next chapter will come more earlier than this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whos the main character the oc or naruto? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Question, Whos the main character the oc or naruto |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I have to admit...this was a great read and I enjoyed all of the chaos that came in this chapter: the rescue of Fuu from Akatsuki, Neji's unexpected apology to Hinata and Naruto opening up to Inochi his therapist about his hatred and raw feelings of hurt concerning how inactive Jiraiya was during his early years in life. Well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i hope this ends as a NaruroxHinataxFu |
![]() ![]() ![]() Story's enjoyable, but the annotations by the author and hilarious. Keep it up LR |
![]() ![]() ![]() when will you be having all the reviewer chapters up and running? because I would like to test the RANGER LAIRS walls with some weapons from ratchet and clank |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kamen Rider Fourze and Naruto AU Naruto Uzumaki as Kamen Rider Fourze Naruto x Hinata |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would like to show up in the gear of Edward Kenway from black flag. |