For accidentally finding this fic looking up “ ac Desmond reborn in Naruto world” I am absolutely in love. I love the way you portray Naruto, Hinata, Anko, and even Kurenai. They aren’t completely OC , they actually still fit the original characteristics ,etc., and the story portrays their growth and development into who the are now. I think Naruto could say “Believe it” more often as in the manga and Japanese anime it is a verbal tick that he inherited from his mother and that half of Uzu portrayed as well. The writing style you use to describe and write gives enough detail without over doing it, keeping the readers attention and not tiring them out. I’ll admit that I read all 51 chapters in 2 days, it’s that’s good. I believe you could become a professional writer and make your own original works someday if you haven’t already. I’m gonna check out your other stories while I await an update for this masterpiece.

Wait till he's twenty-something to do that recruiting crap. I refuse to continue reading if the first order of business after he's situated is building another brotherhood. I don't even like that fact that the brotherhood was compromised. The only reason I won't complain all that much is because he didn't willingly give that information. I still feel like he should have been more hostile after that though. He's eighteen. Make him feel like it. Also telling people he's from another world. After Anko, that junk better be put to rest.

I'm so happy to see this st9ry get an update! Seriously though, hope things are going well.

Oh, b8g Fuu fan!

I would love to log in to leave this, but unfortunately cannot. This has been one of the greatest fanfics I've read in quite some time. Binge read this over a few days between work and it kept me hooked. I did have a question (and I might have missed it), was there any promotions from the Chuunin exam? It wouldn't affect how much I've enjoyed this, just curious.

loving it, keep it coming

A very well written story. The characters are well written and the way it diverges from cannon, is both realistic and compelling. Everything comes together nicely. Excellent job.

A very well written story. The grammar and spelling are a bit wonky at the begining, but quickly improves. The story line is a great mix of the two franchises, the crecter

*Is in FranceUses Spanish*

Would be hilarious if Raphael had a space affinity or something from traveling franchises lol

Like dimensional cuts and apperation like in overlord and Harry Potter

Maybe portals like doctor strange

Ooh and bending space to shorten distance or to lengthen space

Like he could shorten distance to get a stab in from a distance

Maybe be as fast as flash (reacting to that speed is another thing) and make other things as fast too

Make kunais as fast as bullets and shuriken as buzz saw bullets

Or to dodge anything by lengthening distance for more time to dodge

Maybe make himself as thin as paper like the night buss in Harry Potter and dodge like the cp9 from one piece

Space is reeaaally versatile

One of the constants of the universe

Finally! I made it tomthe present!

Now I just got to say, wow. This is great, happy you make works, yes i have read your other stories, like this.

Cant wait for more.

And like that Danzo...you just lost public opinion

the problem with As plan is that yugito would have given information about Kumo which would include big names and descriptions of them so how will B hide his identity as well as others?

great chapter. glad to see fuu made it safely to konoha, but will she be safe there with someone like danzo in the village? will sarutobi be able to placate the other villages? will they listen when he explains the threat of the akatsuki?

First thing I want to say is I'm sorry I didn't review you story in a while as I forgot and I was dealing with some life issues along with trying to write for my stories again but I honestly feel like I've lost the passion and drive for it. I'm trying to get it back it right now. I'm sorry to hear about you Dad losing his job and I hope he will find a new one soon.

As for this chapter I enjoyed it while I'm more into action scenes but this was all right. The scene between Anko and Raphael was cool with Anko performing the tea ceremony. Another thing I enjoyed was Naruto introducing his new weapon the Phantom Blade to his friends and I honestly hope he can use a pistol in the future but this is an excellent choice to take care of his enimes.

The Akatsuki are now looking to cause trouble for Konoha with Hidan running his mouth and I hope you kill that asshole soon.

Fuu is now part of Konoha and I hope she joins the Assasins Guild. Though Danzo could be a problem as that power hungry prick will try anything to get her in his group. But the biggest news in this chapter is that there will be a Kage summit and Hiruzen will retire after this to name Tsunade his
successor plus I enjoy the shot he took at Danzo. I hope Hiruzen can train Konohamaru to reach his potential.

This is getting good and I hope to see more soon. When I get the chance I will review the other chapters.

Good Luck Leaf Ranger.

Gotta admit, I was really hoping Naruto would try for a Phantom Blade given his use of a crossbow. I've always loved the image of a wrist mounted crossbow, be it above or below the wrist. Also yes, it is rather jarring for people who only know Naruto characters by what they see in the anime and what they read in the manga to see that Anko practices traditional tea ceremony as a hobby, meanwhile Kurenai is the drinker...liking hard drinks like Shochu (strong sake) and vodka in the evenings..you'd think there would be more fics where Kurenai meets up with Tsunade to get hammered lol.

As for Unity...yes the game IS still a buggy mess, but the Phantom Blade WAS the best part of the game...you can get a used copy of said game for around or under 20 bucks...might just get me a copy in the future since I THINK I traded in my copy..gonna have to really go through my collection and see if I still have it or not before I do that..might have traded it in for money off another game at the local Gamestop after I stopped playing the game...sad it's still a buggy freaking mess to the point the horrifying "Floating teeth and eyes" glitch can STILL apparently happen even now...