Reviews for I am not a Hero
Team04Phantom chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
Nice, Betty. Simple and beautiful. It leaves me wondering what happened, though. This piece stands alone well but a companion piece would work well.

I couldn't help but notice how much your writing has improved. Wow! I don't know what you are doing but keep it up. The grammar was excellent, which doesn't change much but I noticed the flowing of the words came almost naturally. Not only could I see what you were writing, it sounded great. I am really impressed. Your writing has improved so well since your first upload, you're making me look like a slop. Lol. Great job!

- (Four)
Guest chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
(Do not really talk English, so do not bother me ok? ;P) A thief steals a purse from a woman. He needs money to survive. (obviously :P)
a girl blocking the way for the thief and thus helps the lady.(Again, I'm sorry that I was born in Norway)
hmmmmm... this looked cooler innside off my head...
The point is: I understand what you are trying to say here.
(In fact, I feel exactly the same. No one takes me seriously do...)
keep writing.
Leonardo DiCaprio chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
nice job! i like how its centered! it looks all fancy-like