|Reviews for Fifty Shades of Baby Brain|
| RavenLight Dragon chapter 9 . 9/20/2014
Here it comes! Kate and Elliot are gonna feel like shit when they find out they helped Ana run from Christian for no reason and Ana, when she finds out she's gonna punish herself for not believing in him.
| RavenLight Dragon chapter 3 . 9/20/2014
Oh no! Christian is gonna freak! Oh man he's gonna go crazy! Ppl are going to need to stay out of the firing line!
| RavenLight Dragon chapter 2 . 9/20/2014
Hmmm why do I have a feeling Maddybisnt talking about Christian? Why do I feel like its Luke or Ryan? Hmmmmm... I hope if its boy Christian that at least he knows cause that's a strange woman in their apartment!
| RavenLight Dragon chapter 1 . 9/20/2014
I always have a bad feeling when she leaves without security. I get she doesn't like having them everywhere she goes but she at risk even without Hyde being around anymore. Christian gets threats daily as does she, ppl look at them all (the Grey's) as an easy payday so there's always the possibility of a kidnapping. I don't mean to be a pessimist but it always freaks me out cause you guys love to write some drama sometimes and we never know what's coming! Lol
| macera chapter 14 . 8/28/2014
Good little story
| WeAreJorus chapter 10 . 8/19/2014
Ohhhh my brain... The YELLING...
| Guest chapter 14 . 5/20/2014
I just loved the story from the beginning to the end. 3
| BnSA chapter 2 . 5/15/2014
I am late to this story, but a pregant Ana and you thought you would have C cheat on her? AS IF...liking Ana and her mind asking questions. She is sometimes a real hoot. Thanks!
| Carol222 chapter 14 . 5/13/2014
| Carol222 chapter 13 . 5/13/2014
What a beautiful ending. There's nothing like family. I feel Ana should talk to someone about her feelings regarding the subs. She is still insecure with Christian's love and does mot yet trust him. His past is a big thing for both of them to overcome.
| Carol222 chapter 10 . 5/13/2014
Sawyer, hmmm? I had hoped it was Flynn. (Joking.). Truly an original story. How do you keep doing that? Carol
| Carol222 chapter 3 . 5/13/2014
Er, it is Sawyer, isn't it? Or Ryan. Or the mailman. Or the window cleaner. Flynn? Yeah, Flynn is a likely suspect. Donna, your storytelling is spellbinding. Just love your work. Carol
| christine.grossmann.3 chapter 14 . 1/25/2014
Truly Excellent ...every minute ...Thanks xxxxxxxxx
| Grey Steele fan chapter 14 . 1/24/2014
Loved it . It was short but to the point, absolutely love Ana Christian bond in this story keep it up
| katlajk chapter 1 . 1/6/2014
What a wonderful first attempt! Over the last three days, I've now read all three of your stories. I began to see the possible twist before it arrived, but that only made it harder to stop reading. Thank you for sharing your gift.