|Reviews for Unexpected Hero|
| Lanaholic chapter 1 . 11/12/2014
Everyone is always telling how great it feels to have those "butterflies" in the belly.. but seriously, it's not always a good feeling. So I really enjoy how you desribe it! Perfect!
Very good idea, nice conversation - until the last few sentences, I really liked it. Why not 'til the end? I can't really tell. It's a feeling, a feeling that something is off. But I also don't know what or how to write it differently so.. nevermind this useless review.
| Mar chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
Wow love it:-)